徐婷
每měi次cì問(wèn)wèn爸bà爸bɑ媽mā媽mɑ什shén么me最zuì好hǎo的de時(shí)shí候hou,他tā們men總zǒnɡ是shì說(shuō)shuō:“聽(tīng)tīnɡ話huà的de女nǚ兒ér最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn愛(ài)ài喝hē酒jiǔ的de爺yé爺ye什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,爺yé爺ye捋lǚ著zhe胡hú子zi說(shuō)shuō:“酒jiǔ最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn勤qín勞láo的de奶nǎi奶nɑi什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,奶nǎi奶nɑi笑xiào著zhe說(shuō)shuō:“勞láo動(dòng)dònɡ最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn貪tān玩wán的de弟dì弟di什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,弟dì弟di說(shuō)shuō:“玩wán最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn貪tān吃chī的de小xiǎo花huā貓māo什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,小xiǎo花huā貓māo說(shuō)shuō:“吃chī最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn長(zhǎng)zhǎnɡ得de粗cū壯zhuànɡ的de小xiǎo樹(shù)shù什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,小xiǎo樹(shù)shù說(shuō)shuō:“陽(yáng)yánɡ光ɡuānɡ雨yǔ露lù最zuì好hǎo?!?/p>
可kě我wǒ知zhī道dào,知zhī識(shí)shi最zuì好hǎo。知zhī識(shí)shi就jiù像xiànɡ一yì把bǎ小xiǎo小xiǎo的de鑰yào匙shi,能nénɡ幫bānɡ助zhù我wǒ打dǎ開(kāi)kāi科kē學(xué)xué的de大dà門mén。有yǒu了le知zhī識(shí)shi,我wǒ才cái能nénɡ創(chuàng)chuànɡ造zào;有yǒu了le知zhī識(shí)shi,我wǒ才cái可kě以yǐ實(shí)shí現(xiàn)xiàn理lǐ想xiǎnɡ。
老師的話
小xiǎo作zuò者zhě運(yùn)yùn用yònɡ一yí問(wèn)wèn一yì答dá的de形xínɡ式shì,羅luó列l(wèi)iè了le大dà家jiā對(duì)duì“什shén么me最zuì好hǎo”的de不bù同tónɡ答dá案àn,同tónɡ時(shí)shí,也yě將jiānɡ自zì己jǐ的de答dá案àn寫(xiě)xiě進(jìn)jìn作zuò文wén,并bìnɡ強(qiáng)qiánɡ調(diào)diào了le知zhī識(shí)shi的de重zhònɡ要yào,深shēn化huà了le文wén章zhānɡ主zhǔ題tí。 丁 銳
每měi次cì問(wèn)wèn爸bà爸bɑ媽mā媽mɑ什shén么me最zuì好hǎo的de時(shí)shí候hou,他tā們men總zǒnɡ是shì說(shuō)shuō:“聽(tīng)tīnɡ話huà的de女nǚ兒ér最zuì好hǎo。”我wǒ問(wèn)wèn愛(ài)ài喝hē酒jiǔ的de爺yé爺ye什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,爺yé爺ye捋lǚ著zhe胡hú子zi說(shuō)shuō:“酒jiǔ最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn勤qín勞láo的de奶nǎi奶nɑi什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,奶nǎi奶nɑi笑xiào著zhe說(shuō)shuō:“勞láo動(dòng)dònɡ最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn貪tān玩wán的de弟dì弟di什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,弟dì弟di說(shuō)shuō:“玩wán最zuì好hǎo。”我wǒ問(wèn)wèn貪tān吃chī的de小xiǎo花huā貓māo什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,小xiǎo花huā貓māo說(shuō)shuō:“吃chī最zuì好hǎo。”我wǒ問(wèn)wèn長(zhǎng)zhǎnɡ得de粗cū壯zhuànɡ的de小xiǎo樹(shù)shù什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,小xiǎo樹(shù)shù說(shuō)shuō:“陽(yáng)yánɡ光ɡuānɡ雨yǔ露lù最zuì好hǎo?!?/p>
可kě我wǒ知zhī道dào,知zhī識(shí)shi最zuì好hǎo。知zhī識(shí)shi就jiù像xiànɡ一yì把bǎ小xiǎo小xiǎo的de鑰yào匙shi,能nénɡ幫bānɡ助zhù我wǒ打dǎ開(kāi)kāi科kē學(xué)xué的de大dà門mén。有yǒu了le知zhī識(shí)shi,我wǒ才cái能nénɡ創(chuàng)chuànɡ造zào;有yǒu了le知zhī識(shí)shi,我wǒ才cái可kě以yǐ實(shí)shí現(xiàn)xiàn理lǐ想xiǎnɡ。
老師的話
小xiǎo作zuò者zhě運(yùn)yùn用yònɡ一yí問(wèn)wèn一yì答dá的de形xínɡ式shì,羅luó列l(wèi)iè了le大dà家jiā對(duì)duì“什shén么me最zuì好hǎo”的de不bù同tónɡ答dá案àn,同tónɡ時(shí)shí,也yě將jiānɡ自zì己jǐ的de答dá案àn寫(xiě)xiě進(jìn)jìn作zuò文wén,并bìnɡ強(qiáng)qiánɡ調(diào)diào了le知zhī識(shí)shi的de重zhònɡ要yào,深shēn化huà了le文wén章zhānɡ主zhǔ題tí。 丁 銳
每měi次cì問(wèn)wèn爸bà爸bɑ媽mā媽mɑ什shén么me最zuì好hǎo的de時(shí)shí候hou,他tā們men總zǒnɡ是shì說(shuō)shuō:“聽(tīng)tīnɡ話huà的de女nǚ兒ér最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn愛(ài)ài喝hē酒jiǔ的de爺yé爺ye什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,爺yé爺ye捋lǚ著zhe胡hú子zi說(shuō)shuō:“酒jiǔ最zuì好hǎo。”我wǒ問(wèn)wèn勤qín勞láo的de奶nǎi奶nɑi什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,奶nǎi奶nɑi笑xiào著zhe說(shuō)shuō:“勞láo動(dòng)dònɡ最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn貪tān玩wán的de弟dì弟di什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,弟dì弟di說(shuō)shuō:“玩wán最zuì好hǎo。”我wǒ問(wèn)wèn貪tān吃chī的de小xiǎo花huā貓māo什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,小xiǎo花huā貓māo說(shuō)shuō:“吃chī最zuì好hǎo?!蔽襴ǒ問(wèn)wèn長(zhǎng)zhǎnɡ得de粗cū壯zhuànɡ的de小xiǎo樹(shù)shù什shén么me最zuì好hǎo,小xiǎo樹(shù)shù說(shuō)shuō:“陽(yáng)yánɡ光ɡuānɡ雨yǔ露lù最zuì好hǎo。”
可kě我wǒ知zhī道dào,知zhī識(shí)shi最zuì好hǎo。知zhī識(shí)shi就jiù像xiànɡ一yì把bǎ小xiǎo小xiǎo的de鑰yào匙shi,能nénɡ幫bānɡ助zhù我wǒ打dǎ開(kāi)kāi科kē學(xué)xué的de大dà門mén。有yǒu了le知zhī識(shí)shi,我wǒ才cái能nénɡ創(chuàng)chuànɡ造zào;有yǒu了le知zhī識(shí)shi,我wǒ才cái可kě以yǐ實(shí)shí現(xiàn)xiàn理lǐ想xiǎnɡ。
老師的話
小xiǎo作zuò者zhě運(yùn)yùn用yònɡ一yí問(wèn)wèn一yì答dá的de形xínɡ式shì,羅luó列l(wèi)iè了le大dà家jiā對(duì)duì“什shén么me最zuì好hǎo”的de不bù同tónɡ答dá案àn,同tónɡ時(shí)shí,也yě將jiānɡ自zì己jǐ的de答dá案àn寫(xiě)xiě進(jìn)jìn作zuò文wén,并bìnɡ強(qiáng)qiánɡ調(diào)diào了le知zhī識(shí)shi的de重zhònɡ要yào,深shēn化huà了le文wén章zhānɡ主zhǔ題tí。 丁 銳
作文評(píng)點(diǎn)報(bào)·低幼版2014年39期