安徽泗縣一中 吳安運(yùn)

◎文體概述

環(huán)保，是擺在當(dāng)今世界各國(guó)人民面前的一個(gè)沉重話題。 環(huán)保與發(fā)展，更是人們關(guān)心的焦點(diǎn)和熱點(diǎn)。環(huán)保話題不但能夠考查同學(xué)們對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的關(guān)心程度、對(duì)事物的觀察能力，而且能夠培養(yǎng)同學(xué)們的環(huán)保意識(shí)。

此外，人口增長(zhǎng)、土地、糧食、住房、環(huán)境污染、課本資料回收、倡導(dǎo)創(chuàng)建綠色學(xué)校等也屬于這一話題。

◎?qū)懽髂０?/p>

Protecting the environment

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, ________. （問題一） Furthermore, ________. （問題二） Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.

The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations.（發(fā)出號(hào)召） Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to________.（采取措施） Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope________.（表達(dá)希望）

→文章標(biāo)題

→呈現(xiàn)話題

→提出問題

→發(fā)出號(hào)召

→采取措施

→表達(dá)希望

模板范文

Protecting the environment

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, automobile emissions have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.

The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with them by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problems will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.

◎經(jīng)典句型

Protecting the environment is everyone's responsibility. 保護(hù)環(huán)境是每一個(gè)人的責(zé)任。

It's everyone's duty to love and protect the environment. 愛護(hù)和保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的責(zé)任。

It's everyone's responsibility/duty to protect the environment. 保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)。

It is known to us all that water is the source of life. 眾所周知，水是生命之源。

We should plant more trees in order to live better and more healthily in the future. 為了將來我們的生活過得更好、更加健康，我們應(yīng)該種更多的樹。

What we have done does great harm to us as well as to the surroundings. 我們所做的給我們自己還有我們的環(huán)境帶來了很大的危害。

Most people lack the sense of environmental protection, so we should awake people's awareness of it. 大多數(shù)人缺乏環(huán)境意識(shí)， 因此我們應(yīng)該喚醒人們的這種意識(shí)。

We need to protect the earth because it is our home. 我們需要保護(hù)地球， 因?yàn)樗俏覀兊募覉@。

We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this,life on the earth cannot survive. 我們一邊耗盡自然資源， 一邊用危險(xiǎn)的化學(xué)制品污染環(huán)境。如果我們繼續(xù)這樣做的話，地球上的生物將難以生存。

If everyone could make a big contribution to environmental protection, our home will become much more beautiful. 如果每個(gè)人為環(huán)境保護(hù)作出一點(diǎn)貢獻(xiàn)， 我們的家園會(huì)變得更加美麗。

We should establish a harmonious relationship between mankind and nature. 我們應(yīng)該建立人與自然的和諧關(guān)系。

Great changes have taken place in China,since China began its reform and open up poli cy. 改革開放以來， 中國(guó)發(fā)生了翻天覆地的變化。

If we don't save water, the last drop of water will be a teardrop of us. 如果我們不節(jié)約水，那么最后一滴水也許會(huì)是我們?nèi)祟惖难蹨I。

◎典題鏈接

假定你是李華。你的英國(guó)朋友Mike得知你們開展了環(huán)境保護(hù)相關(guān)的活動(dòng)。他來信表示很感興趣并想了解具體細(xì)節(jié)。請(qǐng)給Mike寫一封回信向他描述你（們）曾經(jīng)做過的一件事或參與的一次活動(dòng)。

要求：

1. 活動(dòng)或事件的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過程和你的感受；

2. 詞數(shù)100左右；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mike,

I'm glad to hear that

Yours,

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1. 審題立意

本文屬于開放式應(yīng)用作文，其特點(diǎn)是要求考生充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力和創(chuàng)造力，以“環(huán)境保護(hù)”為主題，給Mike寫一封回信向他描述你（們）曾經(jīng)做過的一件事或參與的一次活動(dòng)。該篇書面表達(dá)所選取的話題與學(xué)生的日常生活息息相關(guān)，話題符合學(xué)生實(shí)際，學(xué)生能夠有話可說。所以，在寫作過程中，考生應(yīng)認(rèn)真閱讀題目要求， 根據(jù)題目要求的話題設(shè)想內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，組織篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，一定要注意構(gòu)思要清晰，詳略應(yīng)得當(dāng)，同時(shí)要運(yùn)用必要的過渡詞語，以使文章連貫。

2. 寫作信息要點(diǎn)

（1）介紹自己做了什么樣的一件事或參與了什么樣的活動(dòng)；

（2）自己在這次活動(dòng)中做了什么；

（3）這件事或這次活動(dòng)給自己帶來的影響或收獲。

3. 注意事項(xiàng)

（1）文章講述曾經(jīng)做過的一件事或參與的一次活動(dòng)，應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主；

（2）文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)該積極向上，切合實(shí)際；

（3）合理使用過渡性詞語，以增強(qiáng)文章的連貫性。

【佳作賞析1】

Dear Mike,

I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the neighboring community near our school. On arriving there, ①we gave a speech on the importance of protecting our environment, which attracted a lot of people. ②Then we were divided into five groups and tried to collect the rubbish in the community. Influenced by us, ③many people joined us and began to pick up the rubbish. It wasn't long before ④the community got clean and tidy. Though we were a bit tired, we still felt very happy.⑤

Now the environment around us is becoming better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮點(diǎn)分析：

本文作者具有良好的英語語言駕馭能力，能夠根據(jù)寫作要求準(zhǔn)確地完成寫作任務(wù)。文章脈絡(luò)清晰、語言地道、行文流暢、布局完美。 此外， 作者在寫作過程中使用了on arriving there等高級(jí)句型，賦予了文章別樣的風(fēng)采。此外，定語從句、過去分詞作狀語和固定句型的正確使用充分彰顯了作者扎實(shí)的語言功底。

①on arriving there 相當(dāng)于as soon as we arrived，語言簡(jiǎn)潔而不乏高級(jí)。

②which引導(dǎo)的為非限制性定語從句。

③過去分詞作狀語，它的正確使用使行文連貫且富有生機(jī)，提升了文章的檔次。

④固定句型It wasn't long before...意為“沒過多久就……”， 它的合理運(yùn)用能充分體現(xiàn)作者對(duì)重點(diǎn)句型的深刻領(lǐng)悟。

⑤這句話表達(dá)了作者雖然勞累但很快樂的心態(tài)，使文章首尾呼應(yīng)、更具有說服力。

【佳作賞析2】

Dear Mike,

I'm glad to hear that you're interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good job. Last Sunday, our teacher organized us to clean up the Center Park. All the students took part in①the activity. We were divided into three groups.②The first group swept the ground. The second group picked up the fallen leaves and empty bottles. The third group took out the rubbish. To our surprise, ③there were other people in the park joining us ④, too. We spent the whole morning finishing it. ⑤Many of us were very tired but happy when we saw the beautiful park.

Now the environment around us is becoming better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.

Yours,

Li Hua

亮點(diǎn)分析：

本文內(nèi)容中肯質(zhì)樸，作者能夠按照試題要求真誠(chéng)樸實(shí)地介紹了自己曾經(jīng)參加的一次活動(dòng)。文章思路清晰，語言順暢，注意到句型的變換和運(yùn)用。 文章大量使用take part in、 be divided into、 to our surprise、 spend time doing等高級(jí)詞匯，為文章增色添彩，提升了文章檔次。

①take part in屬于高級(jí)短語，意為“參加”。

②此句為過渡句， 起到了承上啟下的作用，順暢地引出了我們參加的活動(dòng)。

③to our surprise意為“讓我們吃驚的是”，雖然看似不起眼，但它卻把前后句子緊密地銜接在一起，使文章過渡自然、順暢。

④joining us為現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語。

⑤spend time doing是固定結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“花時(shí)間做某事”。

◎小試牛刀

假定你是李華， 作為新時(shí)代的中學(xué)生，你覺得保護(hù)環(huán)境尤為重要。請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文向你學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)表達(dá)你對(duì)保護(hù)環(huán)境的看法。

要求：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清楚。

Dear Students' Union,

Yours,

Li Hua