對我影響最深的人

If someone asks me who affects me most in my life， I will definitely tell him or her that the person should be no one else but my father. As a matter of fact， I have been much affected by his humor， kindness， and enterprise ever since I was a little girl.

Father is well known for his humor. He always makes use of his wit and humor to relax tense situations at work. He is so humorous that his colleagues and friends all enjoy staying with him. He also uses humor to create a very happy family atmosphere. My mother tends to chatter about little things. Sometimes she talks angrily without any pause. When this happens， Father just listens to her without a word.“Why dont you say a word， man？” Mother is more angry at Father. At this time， Father would give a cup of tea to Mother， and then replies， “Why not have tea first， my dear？ Just take your time to enjoy it. Im always your attentive listener.” Hearing these words， Mother stops talking with her anger gone at once. Such funny scenes often appear between Father and Mother， which makes our family life happy and interesting.

Father is also very kind to people. He often invites those poor temporary workers who are far away from home to have dinner with us. He always helps our neighbors repair bikes， fix locks and so on. Whenever anyone is in trouble， he never hesitates to offer his warm hands. All this earns him lots of friends and their respect as well.

Father is filled with enterprise in his life. He lost many chances of study before for some reasons. But he has never given up learning all the time. He has read many books on architecture in order to work much better as a housebuilder. He has gone through lots of difficulties because of his inadequate education. But he hasnt lost heart at all. He keeps learning with a strong will. Now he has become a very excellent worker in his company.

My father is the greatest man in the world. His humor， kindness and enterprise are always the power of my life. I am very proud of my father.

Activity A Reading for understanding

Ⅰ. Textcentered chunks

no one else but sb 只有某人

be well known for 因……而出名

chatter about little things 碎碎念;嘮叨

talk without any pause 不停地說

listen to sb without a word 默默地聽某人說話

never hesitate to do sth 毫不猶豫地做某事

be filled with 充滿了……

give up doing sth 放棄做某事

go through lots of difficulties 經(jīng)歷諸多困難

lose heart 喪失信心;泄氣

Ⅱ. Textcentered sentences

一、so...that...引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句

He is so humorous that his colleagues and friends all enjoy staying with him. 他非常幽默，因此他的同事和朋友都很喜歡和他待在一起。

【點石成金】此句中的so...that...意為“如此……以至于……”，在這里引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句。so是副詞，修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為“主語+謂語+so+形容詞/副詞+that從句”。

【運用遷移】她非常熱心，總會在別人有困難時伸出援手。

二、which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句

Such funny scenes often appear between Father and Mother， which makes our family life happy and interesting. 這些有趣的場景總會發(fā)生在爸媽之間，這讓我們的家庭生活快樂又有趣。

【點石成金】此句含which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which指代Such funny scenes often appear between Father and Mother，在從句中充當(dāng)主語。

【運用遷移】張桂梅致力于幫助貧困地區(qū)的女孩上學(xué)，這深深地感動了千千萬萬的中國人。

Activity B Reading for writing

假定你是李華，你的美國網(wǎng)友John在給你的信中提到他的爸爸是對他影響最深的人，請你給John回信向他介紹對你影響最深的人。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 人物簡介;

2. 對你的影響。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

3. 需要使用so...that...引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句或which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。

Dear John，

Glad to hear from you.

Yours，

Li Hua

寫作導(dǎo)引

本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇介紹人物的回信，要求學(xué)生以“The person who influences me most”為主題進行人物介紹。這些寫作要求和所給語篇的主題語境是緊密相關(guān)的。我們可以通過分析并整合閱讀材料的內(nèi)容和語言，梳理寫作思路和積累素材。

一、語篇解碼

（一）內(nèi)容分析

What is the text mainly about？

（二）宏觀結(jié)構(gòu)

Fill in the blanks according to the text.

二、素材積累

本次的寫作任務(wù)是基于同一主題的文章閱讀下的寫作，我們可以通過模仿并運用閱讀中的語言表達，如詞塊和句型，積累寫作的語言素材。

（一）人物介紹的核心表達

1. be born in 出生于……

2. be admitted to 被……錄取

3. graduate from 畢業(yè)于……

4. show great interest in 對……有濃厚的興趣

5. serve as 從事……（工作）

6. devote ones life to 把某人的一生奉獻給……;致力于……

7. make up ones mind to do sth 下定決心做某事

8. with great determination and perseverance 憑借著極大的決心與毅力

9. have a great influence on 對……有深遠(yuǎn)的影響

10. be considered as 被認(rèn)為……

（二）回信的核心表達

Glad to hear from you. In your letter， you said that...

很高興收到你的來信。在信中，你說……

I would like to introduce... to you.

我想向你介紹……

三、寫作支架

Dear ，

I would like to introduce （人物） to you.

Born in ， was .

（概況） showed great interest in and dreamed to be a（n） .（興趣與夢想） was admitted to where

majored in .（學(xué)習(xí)） After graduation， served as a（n） in .（工作） With great determinationand perseverance， devoted his/her life to ? ? ， which made a big contribution to our society.（成就） With his/her brilliant achievements， ? ? ?is considered as one of the greatest ? ? ?in the world.（評價） is always leading me to be a better man.

Yours，

Li Hua

四、語篇過手

根據(jù)以上提供的寫作支架，第一段寫導(dǎo)入和寫信目的;第二段介紹人物的基本信息、品格與相關(guān)事跡;第三段介紹人物對“我”的影響?？傇~數(shù)控制在80左右。

同時，學(xué)習(xí)運用前文閱讀中出現(xiàn)的so... that...引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句等高級句型，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。