昝亞娟

四層考點預(yù)測

1. 應(yīng)用文考查

（1）感謝信

Dear... （稱呼），

I have won... （獎項/榮譽） in the... （比賽） I am writing to express my sincere gratitudeto you for your kind help.

Before I... （比賽前）， I felt nervous/anxious... （感受） because I... （原因） When I turnedto you for help， you encouraged me to... （鼓勵的方面） You were patient with me when I feltat a loss. Not only did you... （幫助點一）， but you also... （幫助點二） Without your kindhelp， I couldnt have... （取得成就）

Thank you again for your kind help.

Yours，

Li Hua

（2）建議信

Dear... （稱呼），

I am sorry to know that you are... （體諒對方的感受） Im writing to make somesuggestions for you.

First of all， it is important for you to... （建議一） Second， youd better... （建議二） Be?sides/More importantly， it is a good idea to... （建議三）

I hope you will find my advice useful.

Yours，

Li Hua

（3）求助信

Dear... （稱呼），

I'm Li Hua， a student in... （學(xué)?；虬嗉墸?I am writing to seek help from you.

The problem is that I lack experience in... （缺乏經(jīng)驗的方面） Knowing you are an ex?pert at/in/on... （具體擅長的方面）， Im wondering whether you can offer me some help.Would you be so kind as to... （提出請求）？

I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

（4）祝賀信

Dear... （稱呼），

I am excited to know you have won... （獎項/榮譽） in the... （比賽） I am writing to offermy sincere congratulations to you on your success.

I know that you have made great efforts in... （肯定其努力的方面） That is why youhave defeated other competitors. You have set such a great example to me. I hope you willkeep on trying and make greater progress in the... （具體努力的方面）

Congratulate again on your success！

Yours，

Li Hua

（5）道歉信

Dear... （稱呼），

I am sorry to tell you that I cannot... （具體無法赴約的事項） as planned. I am writingto express my sincere apology to you.

The reason why I fail to... （具體不能做的事情） is that... （理由） I suggest... （補救措施） I hope this change will not cause you too much trouble.

Once again Im sorry for any inconvenience caused. I hope you can forgive me.

Yours，

Li Hua

（6）邀請信

Dear... （稱呼），

（具體的活動）...will be held/launched/organized on the morning of next Friday. Know?ing that you are interested in... （與活動有關(guān)的主題）， Id like to invite you to attend it withme.

The activity will take place in... （具體地點） Some teachers and students are invited tobe present. There will be... （其他） I am sure you will have a lot of fun.

I?would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply. Looking forward to yourparticipation.

Yours，

Li Hua

（7）倡議信

Dear friends，

I am writing this letter to call on your attention to... （倡議內(nèi)容）

As we all know， over the past few years， ... （事件） have happened frequently. Theyhave caused... （帶來的后果）， which has sounded an alarm to human beings. So it is hightime that we should make joint efforts to... （措施） It is everyones responsibility to... （行動）A small change in our way of life makes a big difference.

Please start from now on.

Thank you！

（8）申請信

Dear... （稱呼），

I am really delighted to learn that... （職位） is required/wanted， and I feel this... （職位或機會） is specially tailored to me.

To start with， my advantage first lies in the fact that... （優(yōu)勢一） Furthermore，...（優(yōu)勢二）Finally， there is no problem with... （優(yōu)勢三）

I do hope my... （資質(zhì)或能力） will win me a favorable consideration from your side.Should you need any details related to my application， feel free to contact me at... （聯(lián)系方式）

Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

（9）咨詢信

Dear... （稱呼），

I am... （自我介紹）. I am writing to inquire about... （要詢問的內(nèi)容）

The following is my confusion. First of all， Im tempted to know... （要咨詢的問題一）Secondly， when will...？ （要咨詢的問題二） Thirdly， is...？ （要咨詢的問題三）

I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and youcan contact me via... （表達感謝）

Thank you and your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.

Yours

Li Hua

（10）通知

通知通常包括時間、地點、人物、事件和注意事項等幾個要素。

第一段：引起注意。

第二段：通知某事的具體細節(jié)。

第三段：注意事項。

第一段（引起注意）：

①May I have your attention， please？ I have an announcement to make.

②Attention， please！ I have something important to tell you.

第二段（通知某事的具體細節(jié)）：

We are going to hold/host a discussion about... A...will be held in...on... All the teach?ers and students are required to attend it. Please bring your notebooks and take notes while?listening. There will be an ask?and?answer session after the speech. It is a great opportunityfor you to... Please come on time and dont be late. Whoever interested is welcome to par?ticipate. Dont forget to/Please remember to...

第三段（結(jié)尾）：

①We are looking forward to your participation. I hope youll have a great time.

②Thank you for listening.

③That's all. Thank you.

2. 非應(yīng)用文考查

（1）人物介紹

第一段（引出話題）：

①Among the people who inspire me most， I admire my grandma most.

②Many people love me and give me support when I need it. Among them， the person I respect most is my dear mother.

③My father is John Smith. He is my real hero， best friend and the one I respect most.

④There are many respectable people around us. But the person I respect most is my head teacher， Miss Li， who is also my Chinese teacher.

第二段（描述人物）：

①She is always willing to help others. Early in the morning she is already out sayinghello to the elderly who are doing exercise in the park and checking whether they need anyhelp. Many people in our community have received her kind help.

②She has been teaching Chinese for twenty years， and she is passionate about thesubject she teaches. She is kind and considerate towards us. Hard?working and knowledge?able， she is considered as one of the best teachers in our school. When we have a problem，we will turn to her for help. She always talks to us patiently and gives a satisfying answer.

第三段（人物評價）：

①Grandma Li is very kind， warm?hearted， considerate and generous. That is why we all respect her.

②In our eyes， she is not only our teacher， but also our best friend. That is why I re?spect her most.

③Though my mother is only an ordinary housewife， she does teach us how to live our? life in the best way. I feel lucky to have such a mother.④My father is such a good role model that he always inspires me to work hard at mylessons and be the best that I can.

（2）新聞報道

第一段：一句話概括該事件。

第二段：陳述與該事件相關(guān)的時間、地點、人物、起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果。

第三段：人們對該事件的評價或當(dāng)事人的感悟。

第一段（概括該事件）：

①As Earth Day was approaching， a series of activities were launched in our school to mark this special day.

②To broaden the students horizons and promote their creativity， our school arranged for students to attend...

③Last Sunday the Han?style costume show was held in the art center of our school.We appreciated the charm of the centuries?old costume and learned more about traditional Chinese culture.

第二段（陳述與該事件相關(guān)的時間、地點、人物、起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果）：

①As soon as we got there， we experienced...， which made learning more interesting.

②The show started with...

③The audiences were so excited that they...

④There were...which drew warm loud applause from the audience.

⑤Li Hua made a speech in the city square on behalf of our class， calling on the citi?zens to reduce waste and recycle the second?hand items so that we can protect the environ?ment.

第三段（對該事件的感悟和評價）：

①The exhibition was more than a feast for the eyes. It allowed us to look into the fu?ture and look forward to living a better life in the future.

②This show was warmly welcomed because it is not only a feast for the eyes， but it also passes on our traditional culture to young people.

③The activity is warmly welcomed by people from all walks of life. They think highly of us because we can make a difference in our community.

（3）報告——記述一次討論

第一段：引出討論的內(nèi)容。

第二段：陳述相關(guān)觀點。

第三段：得出結(jié)論。

第一段（引出討論的內(nèi)容）：

①...has become a hot topic among people. Recently some students have had a heated discussion about... Their opinions are varied.

②We've had a discussion about whether...should be carried out. Our opinions are di?vided on this issue.

第二段（陳述相關(guān)觀點）：

①Some people are against/for the idea. 35% of the students think there are more ad?vantages. There is no doubt that...

②There is no denying that...

③It is obvious that...has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.However， some people hold the opposite view. They argue that...

第三段（得出結(jié)論）：

①As far as Im concerned， ...should be encouraged.

②From my perspective， I firmly believe that their advantages outweigh their disad?vantages.

（4）議論文

●萬能句型

①Recently， the problem of...has been brought to public attention. 最近，……問題已經(jīng)引起了公眾的廣泛關(guān)注。

②Everything has two sides and...is not an exception. It has both advantages and dis?advantages. 任何事物都有兩面性，……也不例外。它既有優(yōu)點也有缺點。

③I cannot entirely agree with the idea that... 我無法完全同意……這一觀點。

④I think its time we put a stop to... 我認(rèn)為該是我們停止……的時候了。

⑤In my opinion， it is more advisable to do...than to do...在我看來，做……比做……更明智。

⑥Some people think that... To be frank， I cannot agree with their opinion for the rea?sons below. 有些人認(rèn)為……坦率地說，出于如下原因，我不同意他們的觀點。

⑦The answer to this problem involves many interrelated reasons. For one thing， ...For another， ... 這一問題的答案涉及許多相互關(guān)聯(lián)的原因。一方面……，另一方面……

⑧There are at least two reasons contributing to... 至少有兩條理由導(dǎo)致了……

⑨Its hardly too much to say that... 毫不夸張地說……

⑩If we cant take useful means， we may not control this trend， and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly， so what we should do is... 我們?nèi)绻徊扇∮行У姆椒?，就可能控制不了這種趨勢，并且會出現(xiàn)一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我們應(yīng)該做的是……

11.As far as I am concerned， I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that... 就我而言，在某種程度上我同意后面的觀點。我認(rèn)為……

12.It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很緊迫的是，應(yīng)立即采取措施阻止這一事態(tài)的發(fā)展。

13.In a word， the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of... Only in this way can...in the future.總而言之，整個社會應(yīng)該密切關(guān)注……的問題。只有這樣才能在將來……

●黃金模板

①對比觀點型

Some people believe that （. 觀點一）For example， they think .（舉例論證）And it will bring them （. 為他們帶來的好處/壞處）

In my opinion， this reason can be the point/its disadvantages are far more than its ad?vantages.（亮明自己的觀點）For one thing， （. 反對的理由之一）For anotherthing， （. 反對的理由之二）

From all what I have said， I agree with the thought that （. 自己的看法）

②社會現(xiàn)象型

Nowadays， there exists a common phenomenon that （. 社會現(xiàn)象描述）

There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon.（主題句）For onething， （. 理由一）Foranother， .（理由二）Whatismore， .（理由三）

Based on the above discussions， I can easily forecast that more and more people will（. 推斷或預(yù)測）

③解決問題型

In recent years， we have to face a problem that （， 某種問題）which is be?coming more and more （. 說明問題的現(xiàn)狀）As we all know， it is important for（. 說明解決問題的重要性）

We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation（. 總說，提出解決問題的辦法）For one thing， （. 方法一）For another， .（方法二）Finally， （. 方法三）

Personally， I believe .（自己的解決方法） Consequently， I ' m confidentthat （. 對解決該問題很有信心）

四翼考法預(yù)判

1. 保持半開放性

為充分發(fā)揮高考的選拔功能，高考書面表達將繼續(xù)采用半開放性形式，為考生留出較大的自主發(fā)揮的空間。

典題鏈接

假定你是李華，你的外國網(wǎng)友Eric目前在你所在的學(xué)校留學(xué)，他想在暑假期間參觀一些具有中國特色的古建筑。請根據(jù)下面的寫作提示，給他寫一封郵件。

1. 推薦一處古建筑；

2. 該古建筑的主要特點；

3. 推薦的原因。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

命題分析

本題是半開放性作文?？忌枰灾鳑Q定寫哪一處具有中國特色的古建筑，并介紹其主要特點以及推薦的原因，這有利于考查考生的綜合能力。

佳作欣賞

Dear Eric，

I'm delighted to know that you are interested in ancient Chinese architecture. Id liketo recommend you to visit the Great Wall.

The Great Wall has a history of over 2，000 years. It is the longest wall in the worldthat was built by hand. It is as long as 21，196.18 kilometers from east to west， just like ahuge dragon across North China. As a saying goes，“He who doesn't reach the Great Wall isnot a true man.”I hope you can come and visit it one day.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

2. 考查方式多樣化

為了防止試題模式的固化，書面表達的考查方式可能會更加靈活多樣。除了用文字提示之外，試題的說明部分也可能采用圖表、圖畫與文字相結(jié)合的方式。

典題鏈接

假定你是李華，你所在的興趣小組就“學(xué)生如何減壓？”對同學(xué)們進行了調(diào)查，下面的餅圖顯示了調(diào)查的結(jié)果。請根據(jù)餅圖的數(shù)據(jù)，為校英文報的《學(xué)生園地》欄目寫一篇稿件。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 調(diào)查結(jié)果；

2. 分析數(shù)據(jù)；

3. 談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

命題分析

該作文的提示方式為文字加圖表。試題要求考生表述餅圖上的一組數(shù)據(jù)，對數(shù)據(jù)進行分析，并發(fā)表個人的看法，對考生的思辨能力提出較高的要求。

佳作欣賞

Recently， our interest group has conducted a survey on“How do students release pres?sure？”The above pie chart shows the findings： 30% of the students share it with friendswhile 25% play sports or listen to music. 22% keep it to themselves and 13% surf the Inter?net. In addition， 10% turn to their hobbies.

It is obvious that most students know how to release pressure properly， which enablesthem to live a happy life. What is advisable is that teachers and parents should show con?cern to those who keep it to themselves when they are under pressure.

典題鏈接

在英語課堂上，老師展示了下面一幅圖畫，請你談?wù)勀闶窃趺蠢斫膺@幅圖畫的。請根據(jù)下面的寫作提示，寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿。

1. 簡要描述圖畫的內(nèi)容；

2. 解釋圖畫的寓意；

3. 談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

命題分析

本題要求考生簡要描述圖畫的內(nèi)容，并解釋圖畫的寓意，還要談?wù)勛约簩D畫的看法。不同的人對圖畫有不同的理解。看圖寫作既考查考生觀察和分析問題的能力，同時又考查考生的人生觀和價值觀，發(fā)揮了試題的育人功能，體現(xiàn)了對“立德樹人”的落實。

佳作欣賞

From the picture we can see two glasses of water. Some people see the glasses are halffull while others see they are half empty.

The picture reminds us that different people react to the same thing in different ways.Some people show a positive attitude while others show a negative attitude. Those who arepositive always focus on the bright side of things while those who are negative are opposite.

In my opinion， it is important to develop a good attitude to life， which enables us tofind solutions to the problems instead of just complaining or waiting for someone else tosolve the problems.

3. 命題情境貼近生活，落實“五育并舉”

書面表達將依據(jù)學(xué)習(xí)和生活創(chuàng)設(shè)比較真實的情境，使考生有話可說。

典題鏈接

上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次農(nóng)場采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇題目為“My weekend”的短文，介紹這次活動，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 農(nóng)場情況；

2. 采摘過程；

3. 個人感受。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

命題分析

該試題要求考生寫一篇介紹農(nóng)場采摘活動的短文，命題情境貼近生活，考查“五育并舉”中的勞動教育。

佳作欣賞

My weekend

Last weekend， we took part in a picking activity on a farm. We took a bus from ourschool， and the farm was about 2 kilometers away. When we arrived at the farm， we saw seve?ral kinds of animals， fresh vegetables and fruit trees on the farm. We were divided into two?groups. One group was responsible for picking fruits， and the other group packed up thefruits. It was a meaningful day and we learned a lot from the activity. Through the activity，we know how hard the farmers are and how precious the food is. We should treasure thefood planted by those hard?working farmers.

4. 引入命題作文的考查

考生根據(jù)所給題目寫作文，如給考生提供一個觀點或描述某種現(xiàn)象，要求考生就該觀點或現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法。

典題鏈接

請根據(jù)以下提示并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

Courage is the light of a man in adversity.

注意：

1. 無須寫標(biāo)題；

2. 除詩歌外，文體不限；

3. 內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的具體事例。

命題分析

本題取材于一句英語諺語，即“勇氣是逆境中的光”。該題要求考生就這一觀點發(fā)表自己的看法?？忌粌H要分析所給觀點，還要結(jié)合自己所知道的現(xiàn)象或情況，發(fā)表并論證自己的觀點。

佳作欣賞

Adversity is indispensable to everyones life and it always takes courage to defeat it.

Last week， David took part in a big cross?country run. As a student with a brain di?sease which prevented him from walking or running like other children， he was hesitantabout the race. However， being courageous to face every challenge， he eventually joined inthe race and finished the competition. He won praise from all the audience although hedidnt win a satisfactory place. His experience showed that nothing could be adversities tosomeone with great courage.

一核考題預(yù)演

本部分見P57～P69學(xué)習(xí)妙測“2023年高考熱點命題：書面表達”內(nèi)容。