倪晨晨

細(xì)節(jié)，即微小易被忽略的細(xì)枝末節(jié)。在初中英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)中，同學(xué)們?nèi)裟芫o扣提示要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加某些細(xì)節(jié)，則可以豐盈文章內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)更加生動(dòng)。那么，如何添加細(xì)節(jié)呢？對(duì)此，筆者提出了幾點(diǎn)建議，以期對(duì)同學(xué)們的寫作有所幫助。

一、添加事例，增強(qiáng)說(shuō)服力

正所謂“事實(shí)勝于雄辯”，在進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)時(shí)，同學(xué)們?nèi)裟芙柚鷖uch as，for exam?ple/ instance等詞組列舉事例，對(duì)句子進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充和說(shuō)明，則可以使抽象的內(nèi)容具體化，從而增強(qiáng)文章的可信度和說(shuō)服力。例如：

I am very interested in ball games.

→I am very interested in ball games，such as badminton，volleyball and table tennis.

我對(duì)球類運(yùn)動(dòng)很感興趣，比如羽毛球、排球以及乒乓球。

There are many ways that can help us en?rich our school life.

→There are many ways that can help us enrich our school life.For example/instance，we can play more sports，join interest clubs and so on.

這里有很多方法可以幫助我們豐富我們的校園生活。比如，我們可以多做體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，可以參加興趣小組，等等。

從上面兩個(gè)句子不難看出，原句較為單調(diào)，添加了事例后，使所描述的內(nèi)容更加具體生動(dòng)，語(yǔ)意表達(dá)也更加清晰明了。

二、添加目的，增強(qiáng)邏輯性

在英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)中，同學(xué)們?nèi)裟苓m當(dāng)?shù)靥砑幽康臓钫Z(yǔ)這一細(xì)節(jié)，則可以增強(qiáng)句子的邏輯性，使語(yǔ)意更加連貫，表達(dá)更加高級(jí)。 常見的表示目的的方式多種多樣，可以用動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)，也可以用in order to/ that，for the purpose of，so as to，for fear that，in case ，so that等短語(yǔ)引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)。例如：

She works hard day and night.

→To realize her dream，she works hard day and night.

→She works hard day and night so as to realize her dream.

→In order to realize her dream，she works hard day and night.

→She works hard day and night in order that she can realize her dream.

→She works hard day and night for the purpose of realizing her dream.

為了實(shí)現(xiàn)她的夢(mèng)想，她夜以繼日地工作。

I took a dictionary to hold down the test paper.

→I took a dictionary to hold down the test paper in case it was blown away by the wind.

→I took a dictionary to hold down the test paper for fear that it was blown away by the wind.

我拿了本詞典壓住試卷，以防它被風(fēng)吹

走。

分析上述兩個(gè)句子可以看出，原句只是對(duì)事實(shí)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單陳述，給人以空洞之感，添加了目的狀語(yǔ)后，使句子邏輯清晰，語(yǔ)意豐富，表達(dá)連貫。

三、添加情感細(xì)節(jié)，提高感染力

在英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)中，同學(xué)們?nèi)裟芮‘?dāng)?shù)靥砑右恍┍硎厩楦谢蚯榫w的細(xì)節(jié)描寫，自然而然地流露內(nèi)心的真情實(shí)感，不僅可以提高句子的感染力，而且可以觸發(fā)讀者的情感共鳴。例如：

I finally learned to ride a bicycle.

→It' s a pleasure that I finally learned to ride a bicycle.

很高興我終于學(xué)會(huì)了騎自行車。

→To my great pleasure，I finally learned to ride a bicycle.

令我非常高興的是，我終于學(xué)會(huì)了騎自

行車。

→I was really pleased that I finally learned to ride a bicycle.

我真得很高興我終于學(xué)會(huì)了騎自行車。

→Pleasingly，I finally learned to ride a bi?cycle.

令人高興的是，我終于學(xué)會(huì)了騎自行車。

→What pleasured me most was that I fi?nally learned to ride a bicycle.

最讓我高興的是，我終于學(xué)會(huì)了騎自行車。

顯然，添加了表示情感的詞匯后，原本平淡的句子變得生動(dòng)而富有感染力，讓讀者從字里行間體會(huì)到了作者的欣喜、愉悅之情。

當(dāng)然，添加細(xì)節(jié)的方式并不只有上述提及的三種情況。在平時(shí)，同學(xué)們要多歸納，注意表達(dá)方法的提煉和把握，從而提升寫作的質(zhì)量和檔次。