原文:
My Clothes
Come to my home. Look1 my clothes. This is a yellow T-shirt. Its 5 dollars. The sweater is 10 dollars. I very like it2. This3 shoes are black. They are 20 dollars. And this bag is very cheap. Its threeteen4 dollars. These are my clothes. Oh, I forget my hat. It is a red hat5.
分析:
本篇介紹了自己衣柜里的服飾。敘述簡(jiǎn)潔、有條理,值得學(xué)習(xí),但其中也有幾處需要注意:
1. Look 是不及物動(dòng)詞,所謂不及物動(dòng)詞也就是不能直接跟賓語(yǔ)。如果要跟賓語(yǔ),應(yīng)在其后加上介詞at。
2. “我非常喜歡它”正確的語(yǔ)序?yàn)镮 like it very much。
3.shoes 為復(fù)數(shù),所以不能用this, 表示這雙鞋應(yīng)說(shuō)成this pair of shoes。
4. 數(shù)字13 的表達(dá)需要特殊記憶,thirteen。
5. “它是一個(gè)紅色的帽子。”冠詞a用來(lái)修飾名詞hat。為了避免重復(fù),在此應(yīng)用one 代替hat。
改正:
My Clothes
Come to my home. Look at my clothes. This is a yellow T-shirt. Its 5 dollars. The sweater is 10 dollars. I like it very much. This pair of shoes are black. They are 20 dollars. And this bag is very cheap. Its thirteen dollars. These are my clothes. Oh, I forget my hat. It is a red one.