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Thanks for your invitation. Id love to， but I cant. Because my parents is on business， wont next month until come back. My grandma is ill in bed， need people look after. and English exam is coming. I must study for the exam. So I dont have to come to your party.

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范文：

Dear Tom，

Thank you for your invitation. Id love to， but I cant go. My parents are on business. They wont come back until next month. And I have to look after my grandmother because she is ill in bed. Besides， an English test is coming， so I have to get ready for it. Im sorry but I cant go to your party. I hope you have a good time.

Yours，

Li Ping