河南濮陽縣第三中學(xué) 劉世民
隨著電腦在教學(xué)中的廣泛應(yīng)用,有人認(rèn)為教師將會(huì)被電腦取代。你同意這一觀點(diǎn)嗎?請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語短文發(fā)表你的看法并給出理由,然后給校英文報(bào)投稿。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右(開頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總數(shù));
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
With the wide use of computers in teaching,___
一、審題與定調(diào)
本寫作要求針對(duì)某一觀點(diǎn)發(fā)表自己的看法,屬于議論文。表達(dá)自己的看法時(shí),要觀點(diǎn)鮮明,不能模棱兩可。展開論述要注意理由客觀、充分,條理清楚。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。
二、謀篇與布局
本寫作可分為三部分:
第一部分:提出議題(教師將會(huì)被電腦取代這一觀點(diǎn));
第二部分:表達(dá)自己的看法(同意/不同意這一觀點(diǎn))并闡述理由;
第三部分:總結(jié)自己的看法。
三、布局與行文【范文對(duì)比】普通范文
With the wide use of computers in teaching,①some people think that teachers will be replaced by computers.
②I don't agree_ with_ this_ i__dea.To start with,when students realise that they are being taught by a human being instead of a machine,they learn how to behave politely and respect others, ③which helps them to develop their social skills.Besides,④teachers get to know every student and can therefore help them solve their problems by explaining them in different ways and giving suitable exercises.⑤But a computer can't do this.
⑥In conclusion,the role of teachers will continue to be very important in the future.高級(jí)范文
With the wide use of computers in teaching,①some people hold the opinion that teachers will be replaced by computers.
②I strongly_ disapprove_ of this_ id__ea.To start with,when students realise that they are being taught by a human being instead of a machine,they learn how to behave politely and respect others,③which plays an important role in developing their social skills.Besides, ④aware_ of every_ student's strengths and weaknesses,teachers can guide them by giving detailed explanations and suitable exercises.⑤This is what a computer can't do.
⑥In a nutshell, the role of teachers will continue to be very important in the future.
假定你是李華。最近China Daily就“如何看待中國傳統(tǒng)文化”面向社會(huì)征稿。請(qǐng)你用英語給編輯寫一封信,談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕ā?/p>
內(nèi)容包括:
1.表明自己的立場(chǎng)(傳統(tǒng)文化應(yīng)該得到保護(hù)和傳承);
2.給出你的理由;
3.呼吁社會(huì)共同參與。
【規(guī)范寫作】
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Hua