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◎文體概述

節(jié)假日活動(dòng)涉及春節(jié)、元旦、國(guó)慶節(jié)、植樹節(jié)、教師節(jié)、重陽(yáng)節(jié)、圣誕節(jié)、復(fù)活節(jié)、母親節(jié)等多個(gè)中西方節(jié)假日的起源、發(fā)展、慶祝方式和假日活動(dòng)安排，生日、周年紀(jì)念日、畢業(yè)典禮等多種慶祝活動(dòng)，寒暑假活動(dòng)、社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)、青少年志愿者活動(dòng)的安排，以及參加這些活動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷和感受等。以下內(nèi)容為高考的出題方向：

1.直接描述某一個(gè)中西方節(jié)日的活動(dòng)安排;

2.如何有意義地度過(guò)節(jié)假日;

3.節(jié)假日去某地度假，回來(lái)后寫信表示感謝，以回憶的形式體現(xiàn)假日活動(dòng);

4.以圖片的形式體現(xiàn)節(jié)日的盛況，要求考生進(jìn)行描述;

5.某個(gè)節(jié)日或寒暑假要來(lái)了，準(zhǔn)備舉行一個(gè)活動(dòng)，以通知的形式告知大家活動(dòng)安排;

6.對(duì)節(jié)日的慶?；顒?dòng)的態(tài)度，如現(xiàn)在中國(guó)很多地方流行過(guò)“洋”節(jié)，你對(duì)此有何看法？

◎?qū)懽髂０?/p>

模板范文

The Mid?Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals， it has been enjoying great popularity. Usually， no matter how far away or how busy we are， we will try to return home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky， we sit together and eat mooncakes and fruits， sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities， we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

◎經(jīng)典句型

National Day is coming.國(guó)慶節(jié)快到了。

National Day falls on Tuesday this year.今年國(guó)慶節(jié)是在星期二。

We celebrated New Years Day with a dance party.我們舉行舞會(huì)來(lái)慶祝元旦。

Mothers Day is a celebration in honor of all mothers.母親節(jié)是一個(gè)向所有母親表達(dá)敬意的節(jié)日。

Merry Christmas and best wishes for a happy New Year！圣誕快樂(lè)，并祝您新年快樂(lè)！

Wish you happiness and prosperity in the

coming year！祝你新的一年幸福成功！

Wish you success in your career and happiness of your family！祝你事業(yè)成功，家庭美滿！

To welcome the coming Spring Festival， people spend days cleaning the houses， preparing different kinds of foods， buying new clothes， especially for children.為了迎接即將到來(lái)的春節(jié)，人們會(huì)花幾天打掃房間，準(zhǔn)備各種食物，買新衣服，尤其是給孩子們。

The Spring Festival is coming/drawing near/approaching. It is an important festival for Chinese， when all the family members get together.春節(jié)即將到來(lái)，對(duì)中國(guó)人而言，這是全家團(tuán)圓的重要節(jié)日。

Nowadays Chinese begin to follow some Western festivals such as Christmas.現(xiàn)在，中國(guó)人開始過(guò)起了一些西方節(jié)日，如圣誕節(jié)。

Thanksgiving Day is the most truly American of the national holidays in the United States.感恩節(jié)是美國(guó)國(guó)定假日中最地道的美式節(jié)日。

◎典題鏈接

假定你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日很感興趣，并請(qǐng)你介紹一個(gè)你喜歡的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.是哪個(gè)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日;

2.中國(guó)人怎么慶祝這個(gè)節(jié)日;

3.你為什么喜歡這個(gè)節(jié)日。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)不少于100;

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim，

Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.

Yours，

Li Hua

【試題解讀】

1.審題立意

該篇書面表達(dá)的命題要求用書信的體裁進(jìn)行寫作，同時(shí)結(jié)合提綱類作文的形式。體裁是考生較為熟悉的，再加上該篇習(xí)作要求考生自己談?wù)勛钕矚g的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，話題貼近考生實(shí)際生活。

該篇習(xí)作從話題上來(lái)看，側(cè)重考查考生對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的理解，更是從側(cè)面教育廣大考生重視傳統(tǒng)文化，保護(hù)優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗?？忌趯懽髑耙ㄗx題目要求，把握所給三點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)，分別敘述但也要注意全文段落間的銜接與過(guò)渡。行文要結(jié)構(gòu)明了，詳略得到，慶祝節(jié)日的方式應(yīng)該稍有側(cè)重?？忌€要注意內(nèi)容的豐富，嘗試多使用長(zhǎng)短句，用多變的結(jié)構(gòu)和短語(yǔ)去豐富內(nèi)容，增加亮點(diǎn)。

2.寫作要點(diǎn)

（1）表明自己最喜歡的節(jié)日;

（2）談?wù)勅藗兪侨绾螒c祝該節(jié)日的;

（3）闡述自己喜歡該節(jié)日的原因;

（4）祝愿和期盼回復(fù)。

【佳作賞析1】

Dear Jim，

Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.

Among the various festivals in China， the Mid?Autumn Festival is my favorite， which falls on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. ① On this significant day， we can see a very bright and round moon， which means reunion and happiness. ② Therefore， no matter how far and how busy we are， we will do our utmost to come back home to have a big meal and appreciate the full moon with our family members. ③

Personally， the reason why I like this festival is that autumn is a golden season. ④ It stands for harvest and growth. ⑤ So in Chinese culture， the festival has a special meaning.

Best wishes. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

亮點(diǎn)分析：本篇習(xí)作結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言清新自然，長(zhǎng)短句交替使用，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，精彩紛呈，充分顯示出作者扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底。另外，文章中定語(yǔ)從句、讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和多個(gè)高級(jí)詞匯與短語(yǔ)，如significant、utmost、appreciate、golden season等的使用使得全文一氣呵成，都為全文成為一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作奠定了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。

①which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句對(duì)提升句子檔次，豐富內(nèi)容起到促進(jìn)作用。

②這是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代前面的a very bright and round moon。

③no matter how...引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，從句中的do our utmost to do意為“竭盡我們?nèi)ψ瞿呈隆保颂幏从吵鲋星锕?jié)在國(guó)人心目中的重要性。

④Personally引出作者的觀點(diǎn)，過(guò)渡自然。該句結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜，why引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，而is后又跟有一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句。

⑤該句是作者表述喜歡中秋節(jié)的一個(gè)原因，即“秋天代表著收獲，代表著成長(zhǎng)”，有特殊的意義。

【佳作賞析2】

Dear Jim，

Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.

Its widely acknowledged that China observes different kinds of festivals every year. ①As far as I am concerned， the Spring Festival really gives me the deepest memory. ②

With Chinese New Year approaching， each family will become busy preparing for it. ③Adults will clean the house thoroughly to welcome a good luck. They will also purchase many goods for the festival. On New Years Eve， we will get together to watch the Spring Festival Gala， enjoy the splendid fireworks display and wait for the New Years bell anxiously. What an exciting moment！ ④

When it comes to the Spring Festival， I can list out countless reasons for my preference? for it.

Yours，

Li Hua

亮點(diǎn)分析：整篇文章中，作者對(duì)春節(jié)準(zhǔn)備和除夕的描寫十分細(xì)致，讓人身臨其境，感同身受。從結(jié)構(gòu)上來(lái)說(shuō)，全文脈絡(luò)清晰，層次有序，大量的句式、豐富的詞匯短語(yǔ)、多變的結(jié)構(gòu)，作者都使用得嫻熟老道。特別是末段，作者談喜愛春節(jié)的原因，那種漫不經(jīng)心，那種輕松自如，實(shí)則是扎實(shí)語(yǔ)言功底的充分體現(xiàn)?？傊?，這是一篇出色的習(xí)作。

①句型“It is widely acknowledged that...”表明中國(guó)歷史悠久是世人普遍認(rèn)可的。

②該句說(shuō)明了作者最喜歡的是中國(guó)的春節(jié)，deepest最高級(jí)的運(yùn)用加強(qiáng)了語(yǔ)氣。

③該句含一個(gè)with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，新年與臨近構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系。

④作者此處用一個(gè)感嘆句直抒胸臆，發(fā)出感慨，直白地表達(dá)出對(duì)春節(jié)的喜愛。

●參考范文

Dear Jim，

Im very delighted to know you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.

The Chong Yang Festival， which falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month， is my favorite.

I had never thought about doing anything for the elderly until I learnt about the festival at school. Our teacher asked us to do a nice thing for our grandparents. For the first time in my life， I washed my grandmas feet. Ill never forget the sweet smile she wore and the happiness I felt.

The most important reason I like this festival is that it serves as a reminder that I should do something to show my appreciation of my grandparents love.

Yours，

Li Hua

◎小試牛刀

假定你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)騎自行車去西湖過(guò)端午節(jié)（the Dragon Boat Festival）。請(qǐng)給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：

1.出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間;

2.活動(dòng)：吃粽子（rice dumpling）、觀看龍舟比賽等。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Lucy，

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua