山東 李全忠

?寫作指導(dǎo)

（一）文體概述

演講稿是一種常見(jiàn)的應(yīng)用文文體，作者就某一個(gè)具體的問(wèn)題發(fā)表自己的見(jiàn)解和主張，闡明事理或抒發(fā)情感。在組織演講稿時(shí)，為獲得應(yīng)有的表達(dá)效果，作者要注意演講面向的對(duì)象，注意措辭及修辭性語(yǔ)言的合理使用。

（二）寫作框架

（三）修辭運(yùn)用

________e.g.Have_you_ever_faced_a_time_when_everything_looked_dark_and_you_had_no_hope_at_all?________e.g.As_John_A.Logan_said,“Music_is_the_medicine_of_the_mind.”e.g.Music gives me happiness.Music gives me hope and satisfaction.Music gives me strength and brings me relief.________e.g.Music_has_become_one_of_my_best_friends.________e.g.It_makes_my_spirits_fly_like_a_kite_in_the_wind.________e.g.It_was_the_rock_I_leant_on_to_become_strong_and_to_get_through_those_hard_times.設(shè)問(wèn)______________________________________________________________引用_____________________________________________________________________排比擬人________________________________________________________________________明喻____________________________________________________________________暗喻______________________________________________________________

（四）寫作模板

Good morning,everyone！

It's so nice to see all of you here.I feel honored to have the opportunity to give/make/deliver a speech on/about...(打招呼/引出話題)

Here are some reasons.First of all, _____.Besides, _____.Last but not least, _____./To begin with, _____.Secondly, _____.What's more, _____.As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, _____.(提出論題，論證觀點(diǎn))

From what have been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that _____.(總結(jié)演講內(nèi)容，得出結(jié)論)

Thanks for your attention.(表示感謝)

（五）素材積累

開(kāi)篇

1.Good morning, everybody! My name is Li Hua.It is my honour to speak here.Today,I'd like to talk about...大家早上好！我是李華。在這里發(fā)言是我的榮幸。今天，我想談?wù)劇?/p>

2.It's my great honour to have this chance to deliver my speech on...我很榮幸能有這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)就……發(fā)表演講。

3.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to deliver my speech.由衷地感謝你們給我這個(gè)發(fā)表演講的機(jī)會(huì)。

4.I am going to talk about something that is vitally important to all of us.The topic of my speech today is...我要談一些對(duì)我們所有人都至關(guān)重要的事情。我今天演講的主題是……

正文

1.Have you ever gone through a time when things didn't go well and you almost lost heart?你是否經(jīng)歷過(guò)事情不順利，你幾乎失去信心的時(shí)候？

2.Two weeks ago, I was told I had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.兩周前，我被告知我得了一種很難治愈的嚴(yán)重疾病。

3.It was music that gave me encouragement and happiness.是音樂(lè)給了我鼓勵(lì)和快樂(lè)。

4.As far as I'm concerned,music is sunshine in my heart.在我看來(lái)，音樂(lè)是我心中的陽(yáng)光。

5.The song made me feel much better and I began to listen to music all the time from then on.那首歌讓我感覺(jué)好多了，從那時(shí)起我開(kāi)始一直聽(tīng)音樂(lè)。

6.Music helped me recover.音樂(lè)幫助我康復(fù)。

7.It is time for us to enjoy music in our spare time.是我們?cè)跇I(yè)余時(shí)間享受音樂(lè)的時(shí)候了。

結(jié)尾

1.Actions speak louder than words.Let's take action immediately.事實(shí)勝于雄辯。讓我們立即采取行動(dòng)。

2.I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.我希望你們所有人都能開(kāi)始珍視音樂(lè)，讓它成為你們生活的一部分。

3.Last but not least，it's everyone's responsibility to...最后但同樣重要的是，……是每個(gè)人的責(zé)任。

4.During those hard times, music can help you in the same way that it helped me.在那些艱難的時(shí)期，音樂(lè)可以像幫助我一樣幫助你。

5.Thank you for your attention.I hope you will find what I said helpful/useful/practical.感謝你的關(guān)注。希望我所說(shuō)的對(duì)你有幫助/有用/實(shí)用。

語(yǔ)篇銜接

two years ago 兩年前

and thus 因此

then one day 后來(lái)有一天

so...that...如此……以至于……

from then on 從此之后

in one's opinion 在某人看來(lái)

It's obvious that...顯然……

It's no wonder that...難怪……

so far 迄今為止

There is no denying that...不可否認(rèn)……

There is no doubt that...毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)……

to be frank 坦率地說(shuō)

to be honest 說(shuō)實(shí)話；老實(shí)說(shuō)

to sum up 總之

according to 根據(jù)

as a consequence 結(jié)果

due to/owing to/thanks to 由于

in terms of 就……方面來(lái)說(shuō)

above all 最重要的是

in addition(to)此外(還)

the former...the latter...前者……后者……

to start with 首先

what's more 更重要的是

whether...or not/or...無(wú)論……與否/還是……

as a matter of fact 事實(shí)上

despite the fact that...盡管……這一事實(shí)

on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……

for example/for instance 例如

in particular 尤其；特別

?情境呈現(xiàn)

假定你是李華，你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部近期將舉行主題為“Benefits of music”的演講比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇演講稿參賽。

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【佳作欣賞】

Hello！My name is Li Hua,and I feel it a great honor to share my views on the benefits of music.

Have you ever gone through some periods when you feel very depressed? Two years ago, my best friend was killed in a traffic accident.Realizing that she was gone forever made me so sad that I felt I was surrounded by the ocean of sadness.I did not know how to face my life.

Then one day, I accidentally heard a piece of classical music by Eric Clapton calledTears in Heaven, which touched my heart and moved me to tears.From then on, I began to listen to music because I realized music is the language of the mind.Just as Hans Christian Andersen once said,“Where words fail, music speaks.”Music can truly describe what we are feeling deep inside.

Music helps me remember how much I miss my friend.Music helps me remember all the great times we had and gives me a sense of satisfaction.Music also helps me be grateful for that time together.Moreover,music eventually helps me survive those hard times.If you struggle to face the cruel reality, music can be your guide and friend.So let's treasure the expressive power of music!

Thank you!

?即時(shí)訓(xùn)練

你所在的班級(jí)即將舉行主題為“The power of music”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇演講稿參賽。

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