廣東 黃園園

?情境呈現(xiàn)

你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友Jack 正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，他在博客中詢(xún)問(wèn)如何提高漢語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他回帖，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1.你的建議；

2.給出理由。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

?寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)

Step 1 文體感知

該寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一篇“問(wèn)題—建議”類(lèi)博客。寫(xiě)此類(lèi)博客時(shí)，可以就自己學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)言中遇到的困難提出問(wèn)題，也可以回復(fù)他人的博客，提出自己的建議，以幫助他人解決問(wèn)題。提出問(wèn)題時(shí)要簡(jiǎn)潔、清晰，分析問(wèn)題時(shí)要有條理，邏輯清晰。提出建議時(shí)可以從自身經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，也可以從客觀角度給出解決辦法。

Step 2 審題定調(diào)

時(shí)態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。

人稱(chēng)：第一和第二人稱(chēng)。

要點(diǎn)：給出記單詞的建議；提出自己的問(wèn)題并尋求建議。

Step 3 語(yǔ)言組織

一、核心詞匯

advice/suggestion 建議

offer/give 提供

enlarge 擴(kuò)大

vocabulary 詞匯

view/opinion 觀點(diǎn)

context 語(yǔ)境

phrase 短語(yǔ)

in addition 另外

what's more 而且

instead of 而不是

make up sentences 造句

二、核心句式

提出問(wèn)題

1.My biggest problem is that...我最大的問(wèn)題就是……

2.I have difficulty in...我在……方面遇到困難。

3.I have no idea how I should...我不知道我該如何……

4.This is something I failed to...這是我無(wú)法……的事情。

5.It is very difficult for me to...對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，……非常難。

6.I also have trouble with...我在……方面也遇到了困難。

解決問(wèn)題

1.There are three ways to improve your...有三種方法可以提升你的……

2.In my opinion,you'd better...在我看來(lái)，你最好……

3.It is better for you to...你還是……比較好。

4.When it comes to...,I suggest that...當(dāng)涉及……時(shí)，我建議……

5.You might try to...你或許可以嘗試……

6.This worked for me.這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是奏效的。

三、佳作賞析

Hi! Jack.I am so sorry to hear that you're having trouble improving your Chinese writing.I'm more than glad to offer you some suggestions.

A very good way to improve writing is to read other people's articles.If you read plenty of good Chinese articles, you will learn how skillful writers use Chinese to express themselves, and present information in an excellent way.Thus, you can improve your ability to use the language.Like other skills,you should improve your writing by practicing.Keeping a diary is a good idea.It is natural that beginners make mistakes while writing.But don't worry.Finding out why you made the mistakes will help you avoid the same mistakes and enable you to write better.

Step 4 評(píng)價(jià)導(dǎo)思

General content Basic writing skills√ Do you give a clear description of the problem?√ Is the advice clearly explained?________________√ Does each sentence relate to the main idea?√ Do you use pronouns(代詞)to refer to things or people correctly?√ Do you use correct spelling,punctuation(標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)),and capitalisation(大寫(xiě))?________________√ Are there any grammar mistakes?

?小試牛刀

在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的博客上，你看到Susan 說(shuō)她讀英語(yǔ)文章很慢。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇博客，給她提供一些建議。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.你的建議；

2.你的問(wèn)題，并尋求建議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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