Fried Rice with Eggs

Everyone has their hobbies. I’m no exception. My hobby is cooking. In my opinion， cooking is a great way to improve myself. Now， let me teach you how to make fried rice with eggs.

First， you need to prepare a bowl of steamed rice， some eggs， some hams and some vegetables. Then wash the vegetables and cut them up. Next， break the eggs into a bowl and stir them. After that， pour some oil into the pan and heat it.When the oil is hot， put the egg mixture into the pan. Wait for a minute， put the steamed rice， vegetables， and hams into the pan and fry them with the egg mixture. Finally， don’t forget to add some salt. It can make your food more delicious.

Now， you know all steps. Why not try it by yourself I’m waiting for your good news！

河南省鄭州市第八十二中學(xué)

指導(dǎo)老師 王志強

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習(xí)作結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言流暢。在還原蛋炒飯的場景時，使用first、then、next、after that、finally等表示次序的詞語，使炒飯步驟清晰，一目了然，可以幫助初學(xué)者很快學(xué)會做蛋炒飯。