Should Teenagers Help Out with Housework at Home?

Due to the pressure of schoolwork， many adolescents aren’t willing to do chores. On the contrary， doing housework which seems like a burden can truly bring us plenty of advantages.

First of all， doing chores is each family member’s duty. So it’s essential for us to help out with housework. Besides， not only can it develop our independence， but it can also provide a good opportunity to promote our practical ability. In addition， taking part in family laboring is also a good way to cultivate a better parentchild relationship. Anyway， labor is the most glorious！

In a word， helping out with housework is beneficial to our growth. Therefore， let’s get involved in doing housework right now！

河南省鄭州市第八中學(xué)

指導(dǎo)老師 額爾敦朝魯

點(diǎn) 評(píng)

習(xí)作結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，富有邏輯性，要點(diǎn)明確又兼顧遣詞造句。第一段寫(xiě)了大多數(shù)青少年不愿意做家務(wù)的原因，同時(shí)又指出看似是負(fù)擔(dān)的家務(wù)活實(shí)際上也可以給我們帶來(lái)益處；第二段給出了做家務(wù)的三個(gè)理由；最后一段呼吁大家參與家務(wù)勞動(dòng)。這是一篇不可多得的佳作。