你將來打算做什么

李　惠

同學(xué)們經(jīng)常會被問及將來打算干什么。那現(xiàn)在大家就都來談?wù)勛约旱睦硐氚?！以理想為題寫一篇作文。要求：60~80詞左右。

I Want to be a Policewoman

I want to bepolicewoman. Because I like to helpwithpeople. I like dangerous work. I think I will be able to catch the thief. Because I can run very fast. This is a very interestingthings. Maybe I will become a teacher. Icanwork with children. I love children, so Ill be happy. But I think Icantdo dangerous things. So I want to bepolicewoman.

老師說： be的后面應(yīng)該加a，英語中，可數(shù)名詞使用時，要么加冠詞，要么用復(fù)數(shù)形式，很顯然這里應(yīng)該用冠詞；動詞help后面可以直接接名詞，如果幫助某人關(guān)于某一學(xué)科，就用with 加學(xué)科，而這里不是這樣的，直接去掉with就可以；things 與前面的is顯然不搭配，應(yīng)該用單數(shù)thing；can表示能夠時，不可以用在將來時的句子中，應(yīng)該換成will; But I think I cant do dangerous things.這句話的意思是想說“自己就不能去做那些危險的工作嗎”，將來時中不可以用cant，這句話可以這樣寫, But I think I wont do such dangerous things； be 的后面應(yīng)該加冠詞a，這個問題前面已經(jīng)說過了。從這篇作文可以看出作者是一個活潑、好動、樂于助人的快樂孩子，希望她能努力實現(xiàn)自己的夢想!下面是修改后的作文。

I Want to be a Policewoman

I want to a policewoman. Because Id like to help people in trouble. I like dangerous work. I think I will be able to catch the thief. Because I can run very fast. This is a very nervous and interesting job. Maybe I will become a teacher. I will work with children together. I love children, so Ill be happy. But I wont do such dangerous work! So I really want tobea policewoman!