張念武中學(xué)英語(yǔ)高級(jí)教師，現(xiàn)任贛榆縣塔山中學(xué)副校長(zhǎng)。任教以來(lái)先后被評(píng)為江蘇省中考優(yōu)秀指導(dǎo)教師，江蘇省課程改革實(shí)驗(yàn)工作先進(jìn)個(gè)人，連云港市優(yōu)秀教育園丁，連云港市學(xué)科帶頭人，連云港市教學(xué)先進(jìn)個(gè)人，連云港市教科研先進(jìn)個(gè)人，贛榆縣名師。2012年獲得連云港市英語(yǔ)教師基本功大賽一等獎(jiǎng)。輔導(dǎo)學(xué)生多次獲國(guó)家級(jí)英語(yǔ)能力競(jìng)賽一等獎(jiǎng)，被評(píng)為優(yōu)秀指導(dǎo)教師。主持江蘇省、連云港市規(guī)劃課題各一項(xiàng)，并結(jié)題。2009年被江蘇省教育廳公派赴英國(guó)培訓(xùn)8周。

Dear teachers and classmates, good morning! Its an honor for me to give a speech in this class. Three years ①have passed since we met here. Thinking of the past three years, I have a lot to say.

I want to say thank you! I have learned a lot from all of you. You have helped me so much. I wouldnt have made progress without you. I hope all of you, my teachers and classmates, can live a happy life in the future.

Now I will talk about my dream. I want to be a musician when I grow up. I know it is hard for me, but I will try my best. As the saying says: where there is a will, there is a way.

In a word, the past three years has been ②filled of wonderful memories for me. Good wishes to all of you!

江蘇省贛榆縣羅陽(yáng)中學(xué)九(1)班 孟龍 1. 優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

在初中生涯即將結(jié)束之際，孟龍同學(xué)的這篇畢業(yè)演講令人感慨，他回顧了過(guò)去三年來(lái)師生的共同成長(zhǎng)，也展望了自己的未來(lái)，文章將“憶”與“感”結(jié)合，首尾呼應(yīng)，打動(dòng)人心，是一篇成功的作品。

2. 需要修改的地方：

①have改為has。時(shí)間做主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞使用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。

②filled改為full。be full of意為“充滿”，相當(dāng)于be filled with。

3. 評(píng)分：

按江蘇省連云港市中考英語(yǔ)作文滿分20分的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，本文修改前可得18分。