About My Life

徐琛琪

Im a middle school student. Now Im suffering from stress in our school. I often dream that we can have a different life in the middle school.

I hope the world will be changed because I dont want to study for so long hours every day. Learning should go side by side with relaxation. We should keep a balance of study and rest. The reason is that study without relaxation is awful ， instead， relaxation without study is also harmful.

I hope we will have a lot of exercise which we can enjoy. Doing exercise is good for our health， so we cant just study without exercise.

I wish we neednt wear school uniforms. If we wear different color and style clothes to school， we can show ourselves and own a good heart. I have many beautiful clothes in my closet. But I have no chance to wear them. They can only be stored in it. Do you have the same feelings as mine？

簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：

該生在此文中運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句、表語(yǔ)從句、條件狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等，并把簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句結(jié)合起來(lái)，通過(guò)自己的夢(mèng)想來(lái)想象自己的學(xué)校生活，表達(dá)了一名中學(xué)生對(duì)生活的愿望。本文寫(xiě)作角度略有不同，是一篇能夠給人們帶來(lái)思考的英語(yǔ)作文。

指導(dǎo)教師：楊 萍