如何寫邀請(qǐng)信

江西安遠(yuǎn)縣一中 蔡新發(fā)

寫前導(dǎo)練——話題風(fēng)景

Ⅰ.話題詞匯

1.代表：___________________________________

2.邀請(qǐng)某人做某事：________________________

3.在某人方便時(shí)：__________________________

4.參加：__________________________________

5.對(duì)……感興趣：_________________________

6.為……做好充分準(zhǔn)備：___________________

7.自愿原則：_____________________________

8.發(fā)生：___________________________________

9.免費(fèi)：___________________________________

10.對(duì)……有益：___________________________

11.各種各樣的：___________________________

12.玩得開心：_____________________________

Ⅱ.話題表達(dá)

1.我很高興邀請(qǐng)你參加在……舉行的……。

I am pleased to invite you to participate in...to be held in....

2.如能邀請(qǐng)你參加……是我莫大的榮幸。

It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to....

3.我很高興邀請(qǐng)你和我一起去旅行。

It is my pleasure to extend an invitation to you to go travelling with me.

4.我誠(chéng)摯地邀請(qǐng)你參加這場(chǎng)比賽。

I sincerely invite you to participate in the contest.

5.為了表現(xiàn)出色，選手們應(yīng)該做好充分準(zhǔn)備。

In order to perform very well，the participants should make good preparations for it.

6.你能否早日告訴我是否能接受我的邀請(qǐng)？

Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?

7.如果你能接受我的邀請(qǐng)，我將不勝感激。

I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.

8.如果你能來和我們一起比賽，我將感到非常榮幸。

I will feel greatly honored if you can come and compete together with us.

9.我希望你不會(huì)拒絕我的邀請(qǐng)。

I hope that you won't decline/refuse my invitation.

10.我希望這樣的比賽對(duì)……非常有益。

I hope that the contest will be of great benefit to...

11.期待你的早日答復(fù)。

Looking forward to your early reply.

Ⅲ.情境導(dǎo)讀

假定你是李華，你市將舉辦第一屆城市美食節(jié)?，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你給你校的外教Mr White寫一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)他一同前往參加。包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；

2.活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容；

3.交通方式。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Mr White，

Yours，

Li Hua

寫中導(dǎo)引——技能點(diǎn)撥

Ⅰ.審題謀篇

體裁：邀請(qǐng)信，屬于實(shí)用性應(yīng)用文寫作。

人稱：第一、二、三人稱。

時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主。

情感基調(diào)：介紹美食節(jié)相關(guān)事宜時(shí)，語(yǔ)言要翔實(shí)，語(yǔ)氣要實(shí)在；邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加時(shí)，要表達(dá)出情真意切的情感。

Ⅱ.微技能要求：目標(biāo)讀者的交流和語(yǔ)言的得體性

邀請(qǐng)信的內(nèi)容包括介紹某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)、某個(gè)節(jié)日，然后邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加等。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該讓對(duì)方了解此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的具體情況，并且引發(fā)對(duì)方的興趣。因此要盡量介紹活動(dòng)的亮點(diǎn)和出彩之處。邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)時(shí)，語(yǔ)氣要婉轉(zhuǎn)并且情真意切，但要避免口語(yǔ)化。

Ⅲ.布局與行文

結(jié)構(gòu)與要點(diǎn)第一部分：介紹寫信的目的常規(guī)表達(dá)D e a r M r W h i t e，①I n o r d e r t o s p r e a d f o o d c u l-t u r e，m y c i t y w i l l h o s t t h e f i r s t C i t y F o o d F e s t i v a l i n h a l f a m o n t h.I'm w r i t i n g t o②i n v i t e y o u t o t h i s f e s t i v a l.第二部分：介紹美食節(jié)的相關(guān)事宜第三部分：提出邀請(qǐng)及常規(guī)收尾③I t w i l l b e h e l d i n t h e C i t y S q u a r e f r o m 1 4 t o 1 6 i n D e c e m b e r.④S o m e c h e f s w i l l s h o w k e y C h i n e s e c o o k i n g s k i l l s t h r o u g h m a n y C h i n e s e f o o d r a w m a t e r i a l s a n d v i s i t o r s a r e w e l c o m e t o t a s t e t h e m f r e e o f c h a r g e.⑤I t h i n k y o u c a n e x p e r i e n c e C h i n e s e c u l t u r e t h r o u g h t h i s a c t i v i t y.⑥B e c a u s e t h e C i t y S q u a r e i s i n t h e d o w n t o w n，w e c a n g e t t h e r e b y b u s o r u n d e r g r o u n d.D o y o u s h o w g r e a t i n t e r e s t i n t h e f e s t i v a l?⑦I w o u l d f e e l h a p p y i f y o u c a n a c c e p t m y i n v i t a t i o n.I'm l o o k i n g f o r w a r d t o y o u r e a r l y r e p l y.Y o u r s，L i H u a

寫后導(dǎo)思——反思提長(zhǎng)

Ⅰ.語(yǔ)言升級(jí)

根據(jù)布局與行文一欄提示，對(duì)相應(yīng)的句子進(jìn)行升級(jí)表達(dá)，然后重新將其串聯(lián)成一篇流暢、連貫的作文。必要時(shí)可以增加適當(dāng)連接詞。

①用with the purpose of表示目的的高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)

②用invite sb to do sth改寫

③用be to take place改寫

④用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)改寫

⑤用it is a chance to do sth改寫

⑥用is located downtown改寫

⑦用I would appreciate it if...改寫

【高級(jí)范文】

Dear Mr White，

With the purpose of spreading food culture，my city is going to host the first City Food Festival in half a month.I'm writing to invite you to attend it with me.

It is to take place in the City Square from December 14 to 16.Key Chinese cooking skills will be demonstrated with a wide variety of Chinese food raw materials on display and visitors are welcome to taste them for free.I think it's a good chance for you to experience Chinese culture.Since the City Square is located downtown，we can get there by bus or underground.

Do you show great interest in the festival?I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

Ⅱ.評(píng)價(jià)反思

評(píng)價(jià)項(xiàng)目 項(xiàng)目得分或檔次答題規(guī)范卷面整潔性A篇幅規(guī)范性A.整潔完美 B.較為整潔 C.涂改較多D.無(wú)法辨別A.符合要求 B.減掉2分要點(diǎn)完整性 A.完整無(wú)缺 B.個(gè)別遺漏 C.遺漏較多D.偏題跑題語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量用詞準(zhǔn)確性語(yǔ)法正確性表達(dá)豐富性篇章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)清晰性行文流暢性A.一目了然 B.較為清晰 C.些許混亂D.混亂不堪A.流暢自然 B.較為流暢 C.部分阻滯D.完全阻滯A.準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤 B.些許錯(cuò)誤 C.錯(cuò)誤較多D.詞不達(dá)意A.正確無(wú)誤 B.些許錯(cuò)誤 C.錯(cuò)誤較多D.語(yǔ)法混亂A.豐富多樣 B.較為豐富 C.個(gè)別表達(dá)D.詞匯堆砌寫作微技能個(gè)人評(píng)級(jí)及得分老師評(píng)級(jí)及得分改進(jìn)措施A.靈活自如 B.較為靈活 C.些許體現(xiàn)D.完全缺失