陳光偉

第一類有要點(diǎn)

真題鏈接

（2018年全國(guó)Ⅰ卷）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國(guó)朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 到達(dá)時(shí)間;

2. 合適的禮物;

3. 餐桌禮儀。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

寫作點(diǎn)撥

此類別需嚴(yán)格按照要點(diǎn)順序?qū)懽?，每個(gè)要點(diǎn)需要有一定的拓展，必要時(shí)每個(gè)要點(diǎn)單獨(dú)成段。建議在第一段寫清楚書信目的。

仿真練習(xí)

（一）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry參加學(xué)校的書簽設(shè)計(jì)比賽，想在書簽上加入中國(guó)元素，發(fā)郵件向你詢問。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 列舉部分中國(guó)元素;

2. 你最喜歡的一項(xiàng);

3. 預(yù)祝成功。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

（二）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)筷子的習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件介紹，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 形狀、材質(zhì);

2. 用途;

3. 注意事項(xiàng)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

（三）假定你是李華，本校英語報(bào)正在醞釀改版，請(qǐng)你給校報(bào)編輯寫一封郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 建議去除的欄目;

2. 建議增加關(guān)于中國(guó)文化的欄目;

3. 增刪的理由。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

第二類無要點(diǎn)

真題鏈接

（2016年全國(guó)Ⅰ卷）假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume）。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

寫作點(diǎn)撥

此類別可發(fā)揮空間較大，考生應(yīng)在完成情景說明中所有寫作要點(diǎn)的前提下，多思考如何通過增加相關(guān)性大的細(xì)節(jié)提升寫作的真實(shí)性。

仿真練習(xí)

（一）假定你是李華，你通過學(xué)校推薦將作為交換生暑假去澳大利亞珀斯（Perth）學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)給寄宿家庭（host family）Mr. Thomas寫一封郵件，告知到達(dá)時(shí)間并詢問相關(guān)準(zhǔn)備。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

（二）假定你是李華，春節(jié)前夕從倫敦希思羅機(jī)場(chǎng)（London Heathrow Airport）乘坐航班回國(guó)后發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失物品。請(qǐng)給航空公司寫一封電子郵件，說明情況并尋求幫助。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考范文

第一類有要點(diǎn)

（一）

Dear Terry，

Informed that you want to use some Chinese elements in the bookmark design competition， I am gladly writing to share with you some of my ideas.

To begin with， pandas， cheongsam， Tai Chi， Chinese calligraphy， paper-cutting or even some Chinese characters are very typical and sure to win attention. Among what I mention above， Chinese calligraphy is my favorite because it has a long history and profound meaning. Besides， it is a type of art that has been widely practiced not only in China， but also generally held in high esteem across East Asia and even the world.

Hopefully these suggestions would help and all the best in the competition. Looking forward to hearing your good news.

Yours，

LiHua

（二）

Dear Terry，

How are you doing？ In your last letter， you asked me about chopsticks. Now， I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

To begin with， chopsticks are shaped pairs of equal-length sticks and are commonly made of bamboo， plastic， or stainless steel. They are held in the dominant hand， between the thumb and fingers， and used for cooking， serving or picking up food.Traditionally， it is poor etiquette to tap chopsticks on the edge of ones bowl; only beggars make this sort of noise to attract attention. It is also impolite to spear food with a chopstick. Anything too difficult to be handled with chopsticks is traditionally eaten with a spoon.

Hopefully， the information above would be helpful.

Yours，

LiHua

（三）

Dear editor，

Informed that our school English newspaper is being reformed， Im writing this email to share with you my opinions.

First， it is suggested that the entertainment column can be removed because I hold the view that the columns should be designed to have more positive effects on our study. In addition， a column concerning Chinese culture should be taken into account because the progress inacquiring Chinese culture contributes to deepening our understanding of who we are as well as broadening our horizons.

What have been mentioned above are my personal ideas. I am in the hope that my advice will meet with your approval.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

第二類 無要點(diǎn)

（一）

Dear Mr. Thomas，

Im Li Hua， an exchange student from China. I am glad to receive the letter from school today and know that you will be my host family during my stay in Perth. To my delight， I find we share many common interests， like going to movies， attending concerts， cooking， etc. It will be my honor to live with you， and I believe we are going to have some great time together.

I will arrive in Perth on July 25th and get to your place the next day. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can better prepare myself for my stay there.

Looking forward to seeing you！

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

（二）

Dear Sir/Madam，

I am writing to report the loss of my wallet， hoping you could do me a favor.

On February 1st， 2019， right before the Chinese Spring Festival， I flew on your flight BA039 from London Heathrow Airport to China. I well remember it was with me when I boarded the plane but gone on my arrival in Beijing， so I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during the flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 pound， my ID card， and a family photo in it.

I appreciate it if you could help me check if anyone has happened to find it and sent it to the Lost and Found. Thank you and looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

責(zé)任編輯 蔣小青