我們先來(lái)看看以下一組雅思考試真題:
1. Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?? (2011/8/3)
2. Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2015/12/12)
3. Nowadays, there is a large amount of advertising aimed at children. Some people think they have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2016/2/20)
4. New parents should attend parenting courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2016/5/28)
5. Some people think that technology makes life complex, so we should make our life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2017/2/18)
6. Nowadays, many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?? (2018/11/10)
以上這些題目的共同點(diǎn)是:命題人先給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),然后問(wèn)考生“在何種程度上同意或者不同意”這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。題目具體要求請(qǐng)看下表。
這類題目中,問(wèn)題其實(shí)可以分為兩個(gè)部分:第一,我們是否同意題目中的觀點(diǎn)?第二,我們?cè)谑裁闯潭壬贤?不同意?老雅發(fā)現(xiàn),在面對(duì)這樣的題目時(shí),很多烤鴨有一個(gè)不好的傾向,使用一邊倒的思維方式,即看到題目馬上就給出絕對(duì)的“同意”或者“不同意”,然后去展開(kāi)論證。必須承認(rèn),這種思維方式對(duì)個(gè)別題目是適用的,但對(duì)于大多數(shù)這樣的題目,命題者是希望考生能夠更深入地討論下去,并回答這樣的問(wèn)題:就這個(gè)觀點(diǎn),我在什么層次、方面或條件下是同意的,但在其他層次、方面或條件下我不同意。這樣的思維,才是真正符合這個(gè)題目要求的。因此,總體來(lái)說(shuō),這類題目的行文結(jié)構(gòu)如下:
第1段:引出要討論的觀點(diǎn)
第2段:分析在什么層次/方面/條件下同意題目中觀點(diǎn)
第3段:分析在什么層次/方面/條件下不同意題目中觀點(diǎn)
第4段:結(jié)論
就層次而言,我們可以考慮物質(zhì)、心理和社會(huì)層次。比如“是否有必要花錢探索外空”這個(gè)題目,在物質(zhì)層次上我們可以反對(duì)探索外空,因?yàn)檫@個(gè)事情要花很多金錢,而這些金錢應(yīng)該用來(lái)解決人類目前存在的現(xiàn)實(shí)問(wèn)題,但在社會(huì)層面上我們卻應(yīng)該支持,因?yàn)榈厍蚪K將滅亡,我們應(yīng)該為人類的未來(lái)而探索外空。就方面和條件而言,我們可以考慮不同人群,不同類別,不同歷史/社會(huì)條件等。比如“我們現(xiàn)在應(yīng)不應(yīng)該到南極這樣的偏遠(yuǎn)地方去”這個(gè)題目,我們可以區(qū)分科學(xué)家和一般游客來(lái)分別討論:科學(xué)家應(yīng)該去,而一般旅游的人應(yīng)該控制。結(jié)合以上分析,老雅嘗試給出本文開(kāi)頭6道雅思作文真題的審題思路。
第1題:教育的主要目的是讓學(xué)生對(duì)社會(huì)有用,而不是有利于個(gè)人。
思路:(1)從社會(huì)的角度看,教育的目的的確是培養(yǎng)對(duì)社會(huì)有用的人;(2)但從受教育者個(gè)人的角度看,教育的首要目的是為了找到更好的工作,過(guò)上更好的生活,實(shí)現(xiàn)個(gè)人的價(jià)值;(3)兩者并不矛盾:教育的個(gè)人目的實(shí)現(xiàn)了,其社會(huì)目的也就實(shí)現(xiàn)了。
第2題:閱讀故事比看電視或打電腦游戲更好。
思路:(1)在培養(yǎng)孩子的想象力方面,閱讀故事的確比看電視或打游戲更好;(2)但是在培養(yǎng)孩子的語(yǔ)言能力方面,看電視也許更好;打電腦游戲則可以培養(yǎng)孩子解決問(wèn)題的關(guān)鍵能力;(3)作為學(xué)習(xí)方式,閱讀故事和看電視、打游戲應(yīng)該有機(jī)結(jié)合起來(lái)。
第3題:兒童廣告對(duì)孩子有害,應(yīng)該禁止。
思路:(1)兒童廣告在多方面有害,比如制造孩子欲望,給孩子一些關(guān)于世界的錯(cuò)誤印象;(2)在生活層面上,兒童廣告可以提供有價(jià)值的信息;(3)不應(yīng)該禁止兒童廣告,而是要對(duì)其進(jìn)行更好的管理。
第4題:為了帶好孩子,家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該參加育兒課程。
思路:(1)育兒課程可以幫助家長(zhǎng)掌握如何帶好孩子的方法,這個(gè)無(wú)疑是有用處的;(2)家長(zhǎng)可能過(guò)于依賴育兒課程中的某些規(guī)則,從而不根據(jù)具體情況來(lái)解決孩子的問(wèn)題,結(jié)果反而被育兒課程所害;此外,參加育兒課程往往費(fèi)時(shí)費(fèi)錢,從而減少了陪伴孩子的時(shí)間,以及對(duì)孩子的直接投資;(3)要謹(jǐn)慎對(duì)待育兒課程。
第5題:我們應(yīng)該不用技術(shù),讓生活更簡(jiǎn)單。
思路:(1)使用技術(shù)有時(shí)候(尤其當(dāng)技術(shù)出現(xiàn)故障或者使用不當(dāng)時(shí))的確讓我們的生活變得非常復(fù)雜;(2)但在生活中多數(shù)時(shí)候,技術(shù)可以讓我們的生活變得更為簡(jiǎn)單;(3)人類技術(shù)已經(jīng)發(fā)展到現(xiàn)在這個(gè)階段,再回到?jīng)]有技術(shù)的時(shí)代已經(jīng)不可能,因此我們現(xiàn)在要做的,就是正確的使用技術(shù),而不是逃避技術(shù)。
第6題:應(yīng)聘時(shí)社交能力和資歷同樣重要。
思路:(1)社交能力的確很重要;(2)但是應(yīng)聘時(shí),不同職位對(duì)社交能力的要求不同,很多職位并不需要應(yīng)聘者的社交能力,而主要是看資歷;(3)不能一概而論社交能力和資歷同樣重要,多數(shù)成功應(yīng)聘者主要還是依靠其資歷。
下面是老雅原創(chuàng)的一篇范文,讀者可以結(jié)合實(shí)例看看這種原因分析類題目一般是怎樣來(lái)寫的。
題目
In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food imported from all over the world. To what extent do you think its benefits outweigh the drawbacks?(2017/5/13)
審題
這個(gè)題目問(wèn):現(xiàn)在外來(lái)食品越來(lái)越多,利大于弊,你在何種程度上同意還是不同意?食用外來(lái)食品,就如引進(jìn)其他產(chǎn)品一樣,肯定是利弊參半。好的地方,無(wú)非是豐富了我們的食物選擇,改善了我們的營(yíng)養(yǎng)結(jié)構(gòu),這都是從消費(fèi)者個(gè)人而言的。那么,對(duì)于整個(gè)食品產(chǎn)業(yè),無(wú)疑會(huì)增加產(chǎn)業(yè)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng),從而提升服務(wù)質(zhì)量,但是壞處也由此而產(chǎn)生:如果消費(fèi)者大量食用外來(lái)食品,這無(wú)疑會(huì)挫傷國(guó)內(nèi)食品產(chǎn)業(yè)的發(fā)展。談及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn),我們可以這樣認(rèn)為,雖然在短期內(nèi)國(guó)內(nèi)食品產(chǎn)業(yè)可能受損,但是從長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)看,競(jìng)爭(zhēng)導(dǎo)致提高,從而可以促進(jìn)國(guó)內(nèi)食品產(chǎn)業(yè)走向世界,因此反而變成一件好事,由此得出結(jié)論:消費(fèi)者食用外來(lái)食品,無(wú)論對(duì)個(gè)人還是對(duì)整個(gè)食品產(chǎn)業(yè),都是一件好事。這里的寫作思路,分析到了個(gè)人/產(chǎn)業(yè)、短期/長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn),這樣的分析就容易給考官一種思維飽滿的感覺(jué)。
30 years ago, American fast food such as McDonald, KFC, and Subway was basically unheard of in China, but now they have become everyday words to most Chinese people and China has probably consumed the greatest amount of American fast food in the world.[用比較的方法和舉例的方法來(lái)引入接下來(lái)要討論的話題]Though the introduction of foreign food is not without negative effects, I do think it is positive to both the individual consumers and the food industry as a whole.[給出自己的觀點(diǎn):雖然引進(jìn)外來(lái)食品有壞處,但對(duì)消費(fèi)者和食品產(chǎn)業(yè)來(lái)說(shuō),都是有好處的]
With greater variety of food coming from outside, we can enjoy a better nutritional structure and greater freedom to choose our favorite food.[談對(duì)個(gè)人的好處:營(yíng)養(yǎng)結(jié)構(gòu)改善,選擇面更大]Now we all know that eggplants and potatoes are vital to our health, but very few know they were originally grown in Mexico and Ireland and were not imported to China until after the 18th century.[舉例論證引進(jìn)外來(lái)食品改善我們的營(yíng)養(yǎng)結(jié)構(gòu)]So the imported food has offered us more nutritional choices. Instead of just taking soy bean milk, many people today have cow milk; instead of just taking breads, many people now have sandwiches as well.[舉例說(shuō)明外來(lái)引進(jìn)食品增加了我們的食品選擇]
Some people may argue that the importation of foreign food may impair the local food industry.[舉反方觀點(diǎn):引進(jìn)外來(lái)食品會(huì)破壞本土食品產(chǎn)業(yè)]This is indeed true in some cases. We have seen many local food brands become obsolete when their foreign replacements are introduced to the market.[論證這種觀點(diǎn)的合理性]However, I believe the intensified competition resulting from the arrival of the foreign food is beneficial to the long-term development of the local food industry, because it will compel the local food companies to improve the quality of their products, which in turn will make them more competitive in the global market.[反駁反方觀點(diǎn):引進(jìn)外來(lái)食品對(duì)本地食品產(chǎn)業(yè)的破壞只是短期的,從長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)看,競(jìng)爭(zhēng)加劇反而會(huì)促進(jìn)本地食品產(chǎn)品的國(guó)際市場(chǎng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力]
Thus, the possibility of having a great variety of imported food is a favorable opportunity to both the individual consumers and the entire food industry. It is, therefore, advisable for us to embrace this development, rather than rejecting it.[結(jié)論:引進(jìn)外來(lái)食品對(duì)消費(fèi)者個(gè)人和整個(gè)產(chǎn)業(yè)都有好處]
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