郁詩妍：My School

My school is not big， but it is very beautiful. You can see many green trees and beautiful flowers. I like to draw them after class. You can see three sports fields. Two are small and one is big. You can see a big and clean library， too. I like reading books with my friends there. You also can see a small stage in front of the first building. This is my favourite place. We often sing， dance， and play the guitar on it. I love my school very much！

五（2）班 郁詩妍

小作者們能熟練地交替使用there be句型和“It has ...”句型來介紹自己的學(xué)校。其中，郁詩妍運用了“You can see”的排比句式，并介紹了自己在學(xué)校各個場所的活動，讓學(xué)校親切可感。陳葭伊則另辟蹊徑，更側(cè)重于介紹多彩的校園生活，這也是在描寫學(xué)校時值得借鑒的一個角度。