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2008-05-13 05:06:04李峰
中學(xué)英語之友·上 2008年4期
李 峰
學(xué)生習(xí)作：
Its Friday, November 14th. Im happy today. In1 8 oclock I have Chinese. I like it because its fun. Then I have math and art. In2 this day I can have P.E. in the afternoon. Thats my favorite subject. I play football and basketball. Then I have a two-days3 holiday. At 6 oclock p.m. I can swimming4 for an hour. In5 Friday evening I have a party with my friends.
名師點(diǎn)評(píng)：本篇按照時(shí)間順序，從早到晚記錄自己最喜歡的一天，條理清晰，語言簡潔，值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。但是仍有幾處錯(cuò)誤，需要注意。
1. 具體某一時(shí)刻前要用介詞at, 具體某一天則用介詞on。
2. 上面已經(jīng)提到過，“this day”為具體某一天，其前用介詞on。
3. “數(shù)量+名詞”。要注意名詞一定用單數(shù)形式。兩天的假期，two-day holiday。
4. can為情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，其后接動(dòng)詞原形，應(yīng)改為swim。
5. 某一天的早上、中午、晚上前用介詞on, 即On Friday evening。
范文：
My Favorite Day
Its Friday, November 14th. Im happy today. At 8 oclock I have Chinese. I like it because its fun. Then I have math and art. On this day, I can have P.E. in the afternoon. Thats my favorite subject. I play football and basketball. Then I have a two-day holiday. At 6 oclock p.m. I can swim for an hour. On Friday evening I have a party with my friends.
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學(xué)生習(xí)作：
Its Friday, November 14th. Im happy today. In1 8 oclock I have Chinese. I like it because its fun. Then I have math and art. In2 this day I can have P.E. in the afternoon. Thats my favorite subject. I play football and basketball. Then I have a two-days3 holiday. At 6 oclock p.m. I can swimming4 for an hour. In5 Friday evening I have a party with my friends.
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My Favorite Day
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