謝建民　宗怡帆

Forrest Gump is famous worldwide. It is one of the best comedy dramas of all time. It has a great story， great characters and great acting. It is not a true story but it takes place in real events in America.

This movie has many famous sayings. The most famous one is “Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you are going to get.” It means that life is full of delightful surprises. Another famous saying is “Run， Forrest， run！” It is said in a scene when the main character is running away from bullies. For fun， people in America sometimes use these two sayings in conversation.

It is about a mentally disabled mans life in America in 1960s and 1970s. He lives through many big events and eventually becomes famous for many things. It shows that people with disabilities can also lead fulfilling and extraordinary lives. But it is not a realistic movie. It is almost fantasy that the main character， Forrest Gump fights in the Vietnam War， plays table tennis in China and runs across the entire United States.? It is an enjoyable movie to watch because of these fun stories.

Forrest Gump is really creative and interesting. He is a mentally disabled man who always has big life surprises. He is extremely kind to people， but they are often not kind to him. He is very curious and tries many things in life. In the beginning of the movie， you may think he will never succeed in life. Later in the movie， you can start to see that he succeeds in many big ways. He becomes rich and even marries the girl he loves in his whole life.

Why does the writer say “he succeeds in many big ways”？ （不超過15個詞）

近日，學校網(wǎng)站英語欄目將組織開展“用英語講述中國電影”活動，請根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容應包括電影介紹和推薦理由。

I like watching films. My favourite film is called Wolf Warriors 2.

Jason Wu worked as the director and he also played the lead role Leng Feng in the film. In the story， he manages to save the Chinese people in Africa.

It is a film that combines humour and exciting action. It proves that China is powerful. As a Chinese， I feel proud of our country. It is liked by people of all ages. It is highly thought of by people around the world.

I think he is brave and we should learn from him.

首段開門見山，點明自己推薦的電影。

第2段和第3段均為電影介紹，可整合成一個段落，使文章結構層次更清晰。

句式結構單一，缺少一些過渡句和連接詞。可以考慮使用復合句、并列句等高級句型。

結尾部分內(nèi)容可再豐富些，增加一些從主人公身上學到的優(yōu)秀品質。

升格展示

Good films are valuable treasures. My favourite film is called Wolf Warriors 2. I have watched it many times.

In this film， Jason Wu is not only the director but also the lead role of Leng Feng. It tells a story about how he manages to rescue the Chinese people in Africa. Whats more， it is a film that joins humour and exciting action together. Each time I watch the film， I feel that our country is powerful， and I feel a strong sense of pride.? People around the world also think highly of the film.

All in all， I should learn from the lead role. If I have the courage and determination like him， I can overcome all the difficulties in life.

綜合點評

書面表達對同學們思維能力與表達能力的發(fā)展有著獨特的作用。書面表達強調設置開放的表達空間。本篇書面表達與單元主題“Films”緊密關聯(lián)， 讓同學們介紹自己喜歡的中國電影，感悟影片中主人公的優(yōu)秀品質，同時反思自我，培養(yǎng)優(yōu)秀品質。用英語講述中國電影，可以培育同學們的中國情懷，幫助大家堅定文化自信。修改后的文章，層次清晰，內(nèi)容豐富。同時，小作者運用whats more，all in all 等詞語，使銜接更加流暢、連貫。