叢林
要求:隨著科技的發(fā)展,人們生活水平的提高,手機(jī)的使用越來越普及,手機(jī)的功能也越來越多。手機(jī)已成為人們?nèi)粘I钪?,不可缺少的必需品。?duì)于中學(xué)生該不該使用手機(jī),眾說紛紜。請(qǐng)你就中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)的利與弊談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn),要求80詞左右。
As we all know the world develops quicker than before. The mobile phone is necessary for us. Many students use the mobile phone at school. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.
Many people think using the mobile phone is bad for students. It may affect students study. Most students will addicted in the mobile phone games. And they also will send the information to their friends at class.
However, some people hold the opposite points, in their view, using the mobile phone also have good things. On the one hand, students can call their friends or parents if they are not at school. When the parents cant find their children, they can call them at once. On the other hand, if students meet new words, they can look them up by the mobile phone.
In a word, using the mobile phone has the good things and the bad things. Like the proverb says each coin has two sides. Therefore, how to use the mobile phone properly is importance.
【簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】手機(jī)在生活中很普遍,這是一篇貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活,適合中學(xué)生表達(dá)的說明文。讓每個(gè)學(xué)生都有話可說,有話想說。要求從兩方面闡述,學(xué)生可緊緊圍繞此話題, 運(yùn)用所學(xué)if 引導(dǎo)的條件句等語言知識(shí)從不同角度將這篇作文寫得豐富而生動(dòng)。文章結(jié)尾表達(dá)作者的觀點(diǎn):合理適度使用手機(jī)是最重要的。
指導(dǎo)教師:李艷玲