趙啟秀

English is important and useful to us.It has been an international bridge around the world.How can we learn it well？Here are my suggestions.

First，we should often listen to the tapes，English songs and programs.Watching English movies is also helpful to us.Second，we should speak English in class as much as possible.Dont be afraid of making mistakes.The more you speak，the fewer mistakes you will make. Wed better join the English club and practice with others.Third，we can read more English newspapers and magazines.Its good for us. Last，we should recite some good passages and keep English diaries.

In a word， as long as we do more listening， speaking， reading ，and reciting， we will learn English well.

簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：

文章第一段開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，說(shuō)明了英語(yǔ)的重要性。第二段運(yùn)用first，second，third，last等幾個(gè)副詞，從聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀、寫(xiě)四個(gè)方面具體介紹學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的方法，使文章看起來(lái)層次清晰。行文緊扣寫(xiě)作要求，語(yǔ)句表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、流暢，句式豐富，不單一。結(jié)尾總結(jié)簡(jiǎn)潔明了，是一篇值得同學(xué)們借鑒的好文章！

指導(dǎo)教師：趙鳳霞