湖北 陳裕明

總有學(xué)生說(shuō),英語(yǔ)的書(shū)面表達(dá)很難,得高分是一種奢望。事實(shí)果真如此嗎？

其實(shí),只要我們掌握了寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵步驟，想要在書(shū)面表達(dá)上取得高分還是能做到的!下面結(jié)合齊齊哈爾市的英語(yǔ)中考題，對(duì)寫(xiě)作的“五要”進(jìn)行解讀。

在學(xué)習(xí)或生活中，父母的關(guān)愛(ài)、老師的付出、朋友的幫助成就了今天的你，讓你走出困境走向成功。此時(shí)此刻你一定有很多感謝的話想對(duì)他們說(shuō)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文。

提示：1.感謝對(duì)象：父母、老師、朋友……(可選一個(gè)或多個(gè)對(duì)象來(lái)寫(xiě))。2.感謝的原因：生活方面、學(xué)習(xí)方面……3.美好祝福。

要求：詞數(shù)：80～100；內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

一、要認(rèn)真審題

須在文章開(kāi)頭就直接點(diǎn)題，寫(xiě)出“生活中、學(xué)習(xí)中，……有很多感謝的話要說(shuō)”這一內(nèi)容，說(shuō)明感恩的內(nèi)容、原因,以及對(duì)象等。如：

In my life,I get lots of help and love from many people.Now,I want to express my thanks to them.

二、要梳理提示

感恩的對(duì)象(寫(xiě)一個(gè)還是多個(gè))；感恩的原因；祝福的內(nèi)容。因?yàn)橛性~數(shù)限制,所以要對(duì)拓展或發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)厝∩帷?/p>

如果感恩的對(duì)象只有一人,則在內(nèi)容上可以適當(dāng)拓展。如：

I want to thank my father.He is both strict with me and in my schoolwork.He seldom gets angry with me,even though I made a big mistake.I love him so much because he has different ways to deal with problems and people around,and is patient with me when I am in trouble or anger.

如果感恩的對(duì)象不止一人，則在內(nèi)容上少拓展,以免字?jǐn)?shù)過(guò)多被扣分。如：

First,I want to thank my parents.They provide a happy life for me.They do much for me and give me so much love.Second,I want to thank my teachers.When I have problems with my study,they are so patient and helpful.Third,I want to thank my classmates.They make me feel more enjoyable and less lonely.

三、要精選詞句

寫(xiě)作時(shí)避免重復(fù)使用同一單詞、短語(yǔ)和句型,也要考慮適當(dāng)使用并列句和復(fù)合句。如上面兩部分的短語(yǔ)和句型：

短語(yǔ)：get angry with;be strict with;be patient with;in trouble;provide sth.for sb.;do sth.for sb.;have problems with

句型：He seldom gets angry with me,even though I made a...;I love him so much because he has different ways to deal with...,and is patient with me when I am in trouble or anger;They make me feel...and less lonely.

詞匯和句型的選擇可根據(jù)自己的英語(yǔ)功底來(lái)決定,發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容也要結(jié)合提示信息和自己的實(shí)際情況進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)匮a(bǔ)充,絕不能隨意編造。

四、要寫(xiě)好尾句

尾句就是文章末尾的點(diǎn)題句。如果是感恩個(gè)人的內(nèi)容,可以寫(xiě)成：

Thank you,Dad!You really help me a lot and I have learned a lot from you.

如果是感恩幾個(gè)人的內(nèi)容,可以寫(xiě)成：

Thank you all.I hope you are all in good health and have a good future.

五、要檢查核對(duì)

答案抄寫(xiě)到答題卡上之前，應(yīng)仔細(xì)確認(rèn)是否達(dá)到了題目要求的詞數(shù)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤等。當(dāng)將答案抄寫(xiě)到答題卡上時(shí)，字跡一定要工整。